BetweenProjects

Greetings, my fellow Wattpadians!
          	
          	My goal for this year is to publish Obstruction as a paperback with a rough ETA of December. I am therefore in need of some beta readers who are willing to give me some constructive feedback. 
          	
          	I love the characters and must admit that they live rent-free in my head 8 years after I first started writing about them. I have therefore decided that they deserve a decent representation of their story. 
          	
          	Known issues are: 
          	
          	The beginning 3 chapters are kind of boring
          	
          	The story drags on at the end, so where do I end it?
          	
          	For print (paperback) purposes, the story is too long. What sidequests and chapters can be cut or edited down?
          	
          	Ethan’s personality is kind of boring. While Oddball and Simon have full personalities from the start, Ethan is basically a shy pretty boy. He  improves, but he starts off as the most ken-doll of all ken-dolls. 
          	
          	Plot holes?
          	
          	I know there are grammatical issues and typos galore. 
          	
          	Pm me for further information. Or comment on the story as it is now on Wattpad. 
          	All input is good, but please be kind.

BetweenProjects

Greetings, my fellow Wattpadians!
          
          My goal for this year is to publish Obstruction as a paperback with a rough ETA of December. I am therefore in need of some beta readers who are willing to give me some constructive feedback. 
          
          I love the characters and must admit that they live rent-free in my head 8 years after I first started writing about them. I have therefore decided that they deserve a decent representation of their story. 
          
          Known issues are: 
          
          The beginning 3 chapters are kind of boring
          
          The story drags on at the end, so where do I end it?
          
          For print (paperback) purposes, the story is too long. What sidequests and chapters can be cut or edited down?
          
          Ethan’s personality is kind of boring. While Oddball and Simon have full personalities from the start, Ethan is basically a shy pretty boy. He  improves, but he starts off as the most ken-doll of all ken-dolls. 
          
          Plot holes?
          
          I know there are grammatical issues and typos galore. 
          
          Pm me for further information. Or comment on the story as it is now on Wattpad. 
          All input is good, but please be kind.

BetweenProjects

Important notice about A Woman's Best Friend!
          
          Due to amazon's policies, I can only run freebies or reduced price promotions for 5 days pr month. 
          
          I've reduced the price as low as I can (£1.99), but I will run regular promotions. 
          
          I'm trying to figure out how to apply a promotion code as well.
          
          And!
          I'm working on the paperback edition! 
          
          Thank you all for being patient while I figure this out.

Callietynes

@BetweenProjects  I tried looking for your amazing book on amazon and can't find it
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BetweenProjects

A Woman's Best Friend is now published on Amazon kindle and I have therefore signed a contract limiting how many words I can publish on other platforms.
          
          This means that it can no longer exist in full on Wattpad. 
          
          As a courtesy to all my loyal readers, it is free for the month of September (£0 to purchase!). 
          After that, it will be priced at £5,99. 
          I will appreciate if those of you who take advantage of the free period, will leave a positive review. 
          
          NB! A few of you have pointed out that you can not access the book. I'm new to this process but it looks like there's a delay in publishing. If you try in a couple of days it should work.
          The freebie is a promotion and I had to select one territory so this September freebie is for amazon.co.uk.
          
          The link to buy it (for FREE!) is
          https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0BC6BV3GM/ref=cm_sw_r_awdo_Z2BCF1M3G6BTMVG9CAVH
          
          I am forever grateful for the support you have given me here on Wattpad and I look forward to the next chapter of my adventures in writing and publishing.
          
          

BetweenProjects

@BetweenProjects it did. 
            I'm sorry I have to drop it from Wattpad but if I want to publish, it can not be in two places at once. I'll run regular freebie/reduced price campaigns though.
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musicaybesos

Wow just finished reading just in time! Was on the epilogue, hope everything worked out for them
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BetweenProjects

I'm currently editing A Woman's Best Friend offline and I've discovered that it's too long. Basically I need to cut a dew chapters.
          
          Dear readers, rereaders and followers. Which chapters are weakest? 
          
          Are there any sub-plots that should go?
          
          Are there any secondary characters that are given too much attention?
          
          I seriously need help deciding.

SpottedMonster

@BetweenProjects .... I loved every bit of both the books in this story.... every bit.... I can't offer advice on chopping it sorry...  
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