Greetings, my fellow Wattpadians!
My goal for this year is to publish Obstruction as a paperback with a rough ETA of December. I am therefore in need of some beta readers who are willing to give me some constructive feedback.
I love the characters and must admit that they live rent-free in my head 8 years after I first started writing about them. I have therefore decided that they deserve a decent representation of their story.
Known issues are:
The beginning 3 chapters are kind of boring
The story drags on at the end, so where do I end it?
For print (paperback) purposes, the story is too long. What sidequests and chapters can be cut or edited down?
Ethan’s personality is kind of boring. While Oddball and Simon have full personalities from the start, Ethan is basically a shy pretty boy. He improves, but he starts off as the most ken-doll of all ken-dolls.
Plot holes?
I know there are grammatical issues and typos galore.
Pm me for further information. Or comment on the story as it is now on Wattpad.
All input is good, but please be kind.