BernadetteVatuloka

@castillokatt85 thanks so so much for the encouragement... I hope that you would also take up the challenge in writing your own book too.. But until then we will both plunge into the world of books that we truly enjoy... It's great to feel that I've met a stranger that have become a friend and an additional sister.. :)

BernadetteVatuloka

Hi... 
          Since reading and following your book, I have come to really appreciate the effort that you put into the entire plots and characters. Through the last couple of weeks/months, I have noticed that the story is basically aimed on an intense situation which means that you've aimed for more of a serious sense of writing. However, though I find your writing skills immensely impressive, it would be refreshing to add a bit of humor into the story. That way, there will be an addition to the diverse plots that you have already installed into this entire book. Maybe an addition of a new character that would bring humor would be what you need to boost your votes??. The reason why I have suggested to add a little humor to this situation, is because in reality, no matter the situation, there is and will be a point in time where something humorous and funny that would pop up unexpectedly. Making life a more bearable I guess.. :)...
          
          So yeah.. Please don't feel that I am in some way trying to dictate how you write or degrading what you have done so far. I am merrily making suggestions to the observations that I've made. Despite everything, I true believe that you are indeed an intelligent writer that I have come to appreciate and.. To some extent.. Envy!.. This is the longest message I have ever sent anyone so if you've read this far than it is beyond appreciated on my part. (So sorry that this message is so long.. ^_^)
          
          Other then that, I look forward to the continuation of your book 'Hybrid' and any other of your books created on watt pad...
          
          With all my good wishes and best of luck,
          xxx.... :) ^_^
          B

BernadetteVatuloka

Hello..
          Umm... I was just wondering. For the book 'Armor', at the end, you had mentioned a second book?..... So the title of the book would be? 
          
          I really would love to read it but don't really know he title and if it hadn't been released then when would it be? Just curious that's all....
          
          Oh and by the way... MERRY CHRISTMAS...
          
          xoxo... B.. :)

BernadetteVatuloka

Hey,
          Thanks for the add... Or is it follow??... Sorry but you will obviously find that all I do is comment and encourage writers but to write my own book is difficult.
          
          But hey on the bright side you now have Fan in the Pacific... Keep on keeping on.. Hehe...
          
          Your pacific buddy,
          Bernie.. :)