AppleJackie

I just posted my first ever chapter on my book. It would mean a lot if you guys could check it out!

loleetuh

Hey can you see how my story Pitch Black is..I don't think it's cliche at all. Here's the description:
          She just wants to die. Everyone he every loved dies.
          Rainy is immortal, perfect. Zayn is mortal, imperfect.In his life everyone he every loved died. What happens if he meets a girl who can't die , but wants to die so dearly?
          
          It's a bit fantasy kind of. Jsut please check it out.