I have to be honest, your take on my story made me smile. It would be nice if the communication barrier between Aiden and Lauren came down like this.
You might be happy to know that I'm in the process of rewriting the series into a full novel. I just checked the wordcount and its at 20k, so I may as well step it up to novel status. Seeing work like this lets me know that I have an audience, so I thank you. It's interesting how much of the characters you've absorbed and been able to emulate them. I think that marks the soul of a storyteller.
Keep writing. I'll read it.
