on page two i didnt understand what Carlisl was sayin when he was tlkin bout he changed Emmet Rose Esme and Edward.
hey girly ur story & imagination & creavity & everythin were just just awsome...i just loved it...i hope u dont give up writing...
This is pretty good, but people don't show symptoms after one day and Reneesme should technically be an adult
I loved the story couldn't comment till now cause I was on my phone I thought i was very good keep up the good work
@tilove98 good point. And wasn't Bella meant to be pregnant? Edward said she as blushing.
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