A little short but you have a great descriptions :) Can't wait to see what happens next :D
the plot sounds promising but there were some punctuation errors and spelling mistakes. my fav part was when she was wearing the skinny jeans.
there were some grammer mistakes and you spelled where wrong but the book is great. good start.
Short but I like it. It's a good way to start the story. I might read Chapter 2 later on.
Interesting.. But this was a pretty short chapter. But over all, I'm liking this.
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