Crossing Over

10 Part Story 9.5K Reads 371 Votes
Asia B By Asia B Updated 3 years ago
Zoey and her boyfriend Jimmy used to have it all. They were in love, they had a great relationship and great lives. But then Jimmy died and Zoey's world fell into pieces. She decides she must see him again and makes the life altering decision to cross over to the Halfway World, where she finds that their being together won't be so simple. Soon they're on the run from forces that Zoey's suddenly not sure their unbreakable love can withstand.
A really interesting plot, and well-written. Her feelings were described really well, and I'm voting for that.:)
It was short, but really meaningful and sad. Beautifully written, with clear details, and it surely made me sad about Zoey. Great job :)
wow this is an amazing intro/ first chapter! i like the last sentence~ quite great
I really love how creative this is. I'm wondering what inspired you? 
You write amazingly well by the way :)
I think it was a good way to start the story. It was good you explained the whole Halfway thing because that was confusing. It sounds like a really interesting plot but I wish it was more clear how he died. The pickiest thing I could say is that you spelled all with only one l. Good writing :)
It was slightly short, but still so original did he like died? Because I was confused, at first i thought he was dead then you said you had to get him back whoch made me think he wasn't dead then you said you had to cross over so I think hes dead!