Not really a HP fan but I liked it despite the fact. The characters and emotions were described well.
:) You're really creative with your writing!
But her moom is a slightly.. rude...
Wow. I really like all your details and descriptions.
Even though I don't really like fan fiction....I happen to really like this one! :)
@RhiannonKellie ah..well i feel stupid now...didnt put two and two together :) im trying to get through the next chapter, but im a slow reader on the computer
Haha i like this, really good and entertaining. But i dislike the mommy :P voting*
Im going to stab Rhi's mum. Haha, this is really good, you portray emotions awesomely!
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