Not really a HP fan but I liked it despite the fact. The characters and emotions were described well.
Wow. I really like all your details and descriptions.
Even though I don't really like fan fiction....I happen to really like this one! :)
@RhiannonKellie ah..well i feel stupid now...didnt put two and two together :) im trying to get through the next chapter, but im a slow reader on the computer
@RhiannonKellie Now that you have explained it, I feel a little bit better about this story.
Tiny errors, but it's cool. I love your perspective, this is a really enjoyable book :)
A few grammar errors, but the idea of the story is good. I like how it's set back in the marauders time
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