The Escape
His deep throaty menacing laugh echos throughout the forrest, mocking me. In a last desperate attempt I try digging my nails in the ground, sobbing, with futile effort. Screaming, I lose all hope as he drags me deeper in the darkness of the forrest's depths...
Lacey has finally escaped her nightmare with Eithen's help. Utterly lost and afraid, trying to pick up the peices and put herself back together again, can she learn to take her walls down and trust again?
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@KatieEbersole I love mysterious beginnings, and you have a whopper of a beginning...you have my attention.
I like your heroine :) So stubborn and doesn't let anyone get to her! Not exactly my type of story, but like :)
i really like the story and how it started, but i know you can do better. It was very interesting and i loved it! you got my vote;)
I really like this so far and it has made me want to read on. I noticed some grammar mistakes but they are easily fixed. Great work. Voted :)
okay. i saw a few errors..little stuff like un capitalized "i"s but no big deal. so far pretty good! =]
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