Love this a lot! The end, I don't know why, but adding that just completes it perfectly.
Well maybe you should try! Your a strong writer and could write a really good continuous story if you put your mind to it ! :) xx
Well written and love the description, dark but good :)
Would like to see more from you maybe something that isn't a short :/ xx
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