My Better Half.

Jasmine is a full blooded werewolf who hasn't turned yet because she hasn't found her mate. She goes to a school in Wolf Creek, which is crawling with teenage werewolves, but none of the boys at the school are her mate. What will happen when the new boy Nathaniel starts at her school? Will they fall in love? Who will save her when her life is at risk? Who will betray her? Is there anyone Jasmine can trust to keep her safe? So the question for her is; who can you trust when your life is at risk?
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:-) This is quite cute although there was a lot of info dumping at thebeginning. I haven't read many werewolf stories so I'm going to give this a shot
I agree with many of the others, maybe make the start more "catchy". I don't know how, but just work on it!  And have fun!
It's good for a start. But it wasn't really catchy, but it did give some information which is good. And the story plot seems quite interesting (:
prologue could be better, it doesn't make me want to read as much as a catchy prologue would but good none the less
Write 16 as sixteen. we speak in sounds not numbers. i know, bit confuzzling eh, i dont really get it either but its the right way to do it
Short but good. Like an oreo. 
just some grammar errors, and at times sentences dont flow, but otherwise pretty good


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