One Crazy Summer
After 180 long, stressful school days, Camilla Earheart's tenth grade year is finally over! Now it's time to pull out the short-shorts, bathing suits, and flip-flops and have a great time off, right? Wrong. Instead, Camilla's mother thinks it's time for her to go spend some bonding time with her father, who she has not seen or talked to in several years. The last thing Camilla wants to do is pack her bags, and fly out to Miami, Florida. However, when she meets a boy at a beach party, her summer turns...upside down. They may have gotten off to a rough start, but she can't help but be drawn into him. He's a good-looking boy, plays volleyball, and is a kind, and poetic guy. His name, James Carter. To make things better, he's Camilla's new neighbor for the summer! So what happens when Camilla has to deal with an unexpected summer romance, and her neglectful father without her mother, or best friend Kai, by her side? Let's just say it's going to be one crazy summer..
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Shadow_Elf
You inputted a strong thought as the intro, which is good. And it's realistic. :)
I like it, the description is great and it's very realistic. You can imagine that these events happen to most families :) *voted*
This is really good. In some cases, you might want to make the paragraphs smaller. The beginning was very good at drawing you in, so kudos for that.
this was really good it's cliche but the father thing in the summary made it not.
Love it! and I agree this is really good for someone who "can't write beginnings" ;) anyways, I can't wait until your next upload!! good job :)
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