Agonizing Darkness

Aero Stanley wakes up in a cold dark chamber, not aware of where he is, and who he is. He could barely walk and explore the chamber, but he manages somehow. While looking around the chamber, he discovered the carcass of his brother, which was his first memory that returnedsince he woke up. Now he must set off on a journey to avenge the death of his brother.
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Im confused loool who's micheal? and why did he suddenly appear and tell them to get lost? :L
awesome!! I love the action in this chapter. its short but oh well maybe u can add some descriptions and more details to it :)
Focus more on description, I'd say
Space out the paragraph more to make it easier to read. 
- Emile
Quite grim. 
I like the change of mood from being morose to somehow relieved to escape then back to where you started. 
- Emile
Hehe. I like the name Winston XD 
Space out your paragraphs more and double space the dialogue
- Emile
Thanks for dedicating(: wow! My very second dedication! I am so proud of myself! (;


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