Poems about life on earth.
Hello there. Thank you for the submission. This is a very well written free verse and I should say the subject is very familiar and relative to all writers. we all can relate to it. You have done great my friend.
"A whole little world trapped inside of my head,
For my eyes only"
- perfect!! i love how relate-able this is =)
@DaydreamerXx No problem! I always love to stumble upon good poetry :P
Its really good (: Im sorry I cant give you hints or tips, im terrible at poetry but this seems to be very well written (: I like the world you describe lol =] *voted*