never read about something like this before, didnt found any mistakes and your story is really descriptive!! :)
Cochroach? Ha! Yeah right one question.... clear up why she didnt take off her heels.
This is really great!! And you're thirteen?! That's pretty impressive! Great writing style also!
Aww this is so sweet. Alex seems like an utter sweetheart. Wonder what 'it' is... Anyways it's a great start. I loved the flashback. Voted.
Aww. Alex and Lizz make such a cute coupleee (even though they're not a couple yet but u know what I mean:P)
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