your vocabulary is superb!!! love your detail! VOTED AND WILL FAN!!what more can i say?? *-*
Beautifully written first chapter. Definitely one for the library! Thank you for writing this.
You write super good in 3rd person. Your descrption was good aswell as the chapter in general.
@Mahshid See?? It was a good chapter, wasn't it! I know a good story when I see one. ;-) @stained_glasses
@stained_glasses I see :) I'm going to follow tomorrow, I wonder what happens after the storm...
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