Amazing story! Great descriptions and your main character drew me in immediately! Please update soon!!
This is good, no grammatical errors but I just do not think it is my type of story. But it is very good.
This really didn't hook me in, it did have great descriptions, saw no mistakes, and an original story line.
I have a friend named Arabella! Anyways, I thought this was really good it has good word choice and great descriptions, I love it :)
I love this!
o: I really do love it o.o
lol i'm terrible at comments, so i dont really know what to say x3
... voted! ^_^
I like it! It could use a bit of re-editing and a little more added to it, but I see a lot of potential to the story!
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