Under the Surface
What if the only place you felt at home, was in the water?
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NikkiIreason
This is good, no grammatical errors but I just do not think it is my type of story. But it is very good.
This really didn't hook me in, it did have great descriptions, saw no mistakes, and an original story line.
I have a friend named Arabella! Anyways, I thought this was really good it has good word choice and great descriptions, I love it :)
I love this! o: I really do love it o.o lol i'm terrible at comments, so i dont really know what to say x3 ... voted! ^_^
I like it! It could use a bit of re-editing and a little more added to it, but I see a lot of potential to the story!
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| Name | Lindy! |
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| Member Since | Feb 04, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 283 |
