Awwwh. This is really good wif some much emotion behind it! Very sad though. I like it :)
*wipes tear from eye* That was so sad but so beautiful.. the last line is so touching.. *applause* Excellent poem, I love it! *voted*
That's beautiful! it's hard to find a mixture of eloquent beauty and serious truth like this. awesome
How wistfully beautiful. The closing lines sunk the depth of this in deep. Beautiful writing, and a beautiful bond. Lovely.
With eloquent phrasing and vivid imagery, you shape a lifetime and a bond beyond death>
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