This is so beautiful! Your mom would be so proud of the amazing poet that you have become!
Awwwh. This is really good wif some much emotion behind it!
Very sad though. I like it :)
*wipes tear from eye* That was so sad but so beautiful.. the last line is so touching.. *applause* Excellent poem, I love it! *voted*
it's hard to find a mixture of eloquent beauty and serious truth like this.
How wistfully beautiful. The closing lines sunk the depth of this in deep. Beautiful writing, and a beautiful bond. Lovely.
With eloquent phrasing and vivid imagery, you shape a lifetime and a bond beyond death>
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