When Butterman's doctor makes a diagnosis of 'too tranquil' he prescribes Seetherol to shake up the patient.
Okay, I seriously did not expect the Mistle and Sarah scene... Although I should have been suspicious when Mistle said he talked to her about his condition! That evil sneak!
I was surprised, to say the least!
This was well-written! I enjoyed reading it!! Nice work!
That would be a lot of work and unless you are going to live forever I don't think that's possible.
It was excellent! I really enjoyed reading about his struggles. The only thing I didn't like about it was that:
#1 It ended unfinished
#2 the plot wasn't very clear
#3 that it ended.