Six teens are devoted to a game with one rule: If a player gets tagged, they must change their life within the next fifteen minutes. The better the player, the bigger the change. One might give their car away, or punch the school bully. Another might change identities or sacrifice their virginity. Anything to keep evolving, to avoid fitting into a label or caring about the junk they own. But their quest for enlightenment has taken a rotten final turn - one of the players has murdered the game's creator, the teen prophet (cult leader?) David Bloom. Our narrator is being framed for the crime; can he clear his name and discover which of his lifelong friends is the murderer before he takes the fall? [sic] is a gritty teen murder mystery that delves into the psychology of enlightenment among the criminally dysfunctional.
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The beginning where David beat the bullies reminded me of Jeff the Killer. And the guy narrating everything is Liu, his brother.
Amazing. - 3 syllables and one word.
That is what I've read so far.
Xp, keep it up!
This is one of the eeriest things I've ever read, and I can't quite place why. David doesn't sound like a game creator, he sounds like a cult leader.
I don't know why, but I imagined Edward Norton narrating this chapter. Even though he's probably too old to play this character haha.
Good gracious!!This is sick!! A masterpiece! Excellent!Perfect for my imperperfect sanity xp
I envy you for making such an awesome masterpiece. Looking forward for MORE!!! :-)

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