Dragon's Treasure (Book 1)

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Maya_2011 By Maya_2011 Completed
Despite what the fairytale says, not all dragons are evil, not all knights are good and brave and the maiden is not helpless.

This journey begins with her.

The maiden, Olivia, is stumbling through a forest, lost after running away in a desperate attempt to seek life beyond her family’s demands. The dangers of the forest come upon her and she flees from a pair of hungry wolves only to find refuge in a dragon’s lair. 

The dragon, Kaden, is not the monster Olivia first thought him to be. After overcoming her initial fright, and not being eaten, Olivia discovers that the dragon has a gentle heart. 

Though Kaden cannot tell Olivia the truth of his curse, he welcomes her companionship, as she brings light to his lone and miserable life. Never has he dreamed that a young woman would be the one to start the change in him. While Kaden opens his heart to Olivia, their growing bond sets off events no one could predict. 

The Prince, Magnus, a self-absorbed knight disturbs their peace. On his quest to slay a dragon, Magnus and his men come across Olivia. When Olivia thwarts his unwelcomed advances, the prince turns towards her with malice and the dragon swoops in to save her. The cunning prince is not one to give up easily, thus Olivia and Kaden are soon trapped inside the cave with no choice but to face Magnus and his knights.

© by Maya_2011/Maya Starling
SkyrimLore SkyrimLore 6 days ago
The book looks exciting, especially since it has a Skyrim kind of view on dragons
maddiemac2013 maddiemac2013 9 days ago
Well yeah it's a bad idea she met wolves last time she did something like that
Dark0Lover Dark0Lover 20 days ago
I like the opening, written nicely and neatly. Poor Olivia, though I got to admit her sarcasm notes I find rather funny. 
I had this book long ago in my library and decided to read it.
theeternalscribe theeternalscribe 21 days ago
Great first chapter so far.  My only suggestion would be to work a little harder at deep point of view. I don't know if that's something you are working on in your edits, but it would make it much better.
that_girl_in_black that_girl_in_black 24 days ago
@Youngplay13 I'm sorry I'm just ecstatic about dragons. Seriously that's how I react whenever I see one.
White_Tiger123 White_Tiger123 a month ago
I'm envisioning smaug the dragon as in the hobbit and lord of the rings