Burning Water (In process of editing and re-writing)
Being an orphan is hard. No family. No home. No normality. But just as things lighten up, strange things happen. A mist. A green 'traveling' mist. The orphans get taken through the mist and end up in the impossible. Zuchon. A flat world with creatures of every color and kind. But that's not the worst that happens; A battle is coming up, and it's not gong to be pretty. Weird dreams and visions come to Lily and Jason. Some tell them things, others just are. Discomforting drawings and symbols appear. Evil is rising. But there is a good side. And they will do anything for evil to stop. Even die.
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SyannePotts
I loved this! So mysterious! I love how it starts and the word choice you use and I love how you ended it... it was burning water!
good job on this. Since I was inside his head I was better able to imagine him being so frantic. Its good so far and I will continue later.
Great story! OMG i love how you added so much detail i felt like i was in the story lol
great work! :D i surprisinly loved it! <3 and i loved how u added so much detail!
;o Your description is AWESOME! The beginning really hooks the reader, well-written :)
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