Skin Deep

Science Fiction: A few years into the future and Google has taken over administration of cities leading to a drop in crime. Even the Google police however are struggling to find a piece of equipment stolen from an experimental dermatologist. Detective Stanley is sent in to try and extract some information from the eccentric Dr. Romanov and his more grounded assistant. Will he manage to track down the thief or will he come to realise that appearance truly is only Skin Deep?
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@TheOrangutan oh of course, its all very well deserved.  If I have time I may get into one of those contests, sounds fun, as well as trying to writing skills
Awesome writing man. Your setting was good, and so were the characters. You could develop on the futuristic part more though I think. Keep writing! :D
so creative, great mad scientist character.  Dialogue and plot well crafted and tight.  Loved your touches of humour, of course. ~)K
Nice story. Reminds me of "The Stolen Bacillus" by HG Wells (gutenberg ebooks 12750).
I liked it. A bit predictible at the end, but I enjoyed reading it.
I gave you a vote.
The plot structure feels a bit weak, but as a single scene it's witty and well-thought out. Well done :)


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Name Gavin Wilson
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