In Your Dreams (Watty Awards 2012)

4 Part Story 1.1K Reads 144 Votes
Hannah and Eden By hmmluvserf3147 Updated 3 years ago
Its not like I have a choice the way I live. I wish she would just go away for once and I could have a normal life. Every night she comes back but I cant just stay awake lying here in this house. Sleep eventually washes over me, no matter how hard I try to stay awake. My name is Luna, I am 14 years old and my biggest fear is HER. Whatever she is, she won't leave me alone, I live in constant fear, and I'm all alone.
Omg Jenna amazing Love should finish it.
Good job but just a small edit. 
                                    My lost though was before fell I asleep was shes coming.
                                    It should be thought.
                                    It was amazing I loved loved it.
honest feed back from me is that chapter was  well written and is great!!
I'm wondering what's gonna happen next?? This story is great please update sooner rather then later :)
AWESOME JOB ! Cant wait for moreee. Read our story that would make me happy (:
ooooohhhhhh I was all excited to read the next chapter so I scrolled up... but there was none... :(