this held a poetic tone. Your writing style demands emotions from your readers. well done
Oooh this is really good. I like all the questions, it's very philosophical, very good start!
Wow, that must have hurt! :P But anyways, this was description, creative, and well-written. I see why you're #25 on science fiction's what's hot list.
Very intriging start. It left me curious to find out out what happens next. I'm going to add it to my library for later.
The inner dialogue is so deep, and the quote was both dark and resounding :) voted!
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