This is so amazing! Riveting, sad, thrilling, and scary all at the same time! Keep up the good work.
i cried when she started talking to her brother at the end........ it was sad...... but i love the story...... :)
That was really good, it grabbed me from the beginning. I can't believe you wrote this in five hours. You have an incredible talent!
i really enjoyed it. i loved your fantastic vocabulary! the story seemed very professional and i'm very sorry if anything like that happened to you
That was great, i liked the description of the storm i thought that was really good.
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