This was amazing!! Actually amazing would be a understatement. It was extraordinary, riveting and exhilarating! I've never EVER read anything like this before!
This is so amazing! Riveting, sad, thrilling, and scary all at the same time!
Keep up the good work.
i cried when she started talking to her brother at the end........ it was sad...... but i love the story...... :)
That was really good, it grabbed me from the beginning. I can't believe you wrote this in five hours. You have an incredible talent!
i really enjoyed it. i loved your fantastic vocabulary! the story seemed very professional and i'm very sorry if anything like that happened to you
That was great, i liked the description of the storm i thought that was really good.
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