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It's the year 2040. Things are WAY different than they used to be. Not only has technology advanced, but everything in life is chosen for you. What you wear, where you work, your childrens names, and even your spouse! And everyone goes along with it. It's the way of life. Well, for everyone except for Avory Hewes. Avory has never liked the system and how things go in life. She doesn't think it's fair that everything in life is set out for you. That no one has a choice in what they do. And she wants that to change. She's going to make it change. She's going to make sure of it.
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I'll read more before giving a critique, but you misspelled Society in the second paragraph.
This is really good. It gives suspense. As this is very short a snappy (a good thing), there isn't really anything to improve on. :) Nice work.
I thought the description you gave me when you requested a cover seemed really interesting so I decided to read this story :D
Ahh, what a chilling premise - especially since 2040 really isn't that far off! I actually think Avory Hewes sounds rather pretty :)
@live_yuh_life Very cool!  I'll add this to my library so I can be sure I won't miss it:)  GOOD LUCK!!!
Aw, that's kinda sad.  I like her name.....really like where this is going!  I think it was a lot of potential:)  KEEP WRITING!!!

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