Knowing You're There

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dreamsmadereal By dreamsmadereal Updated 6 days ago
Lia and Kurt both struggle in school.  She's blind.  He has Asperger's.  The two instantly connect after meeting in the hallway and bond over their musical talents.  With Kurt's family business collapsing and Lia struggling with the fate of her ill seeing eye dog, their relationship is put to test as they face the world around them.
theotheridiot theotheridiot 3 months ago
I like how you started the story and making the readers have a "want to know" feeling about the main character :D
Kyrene_Ko Kyrene_Ko 3 months ago
I agree with @hainachu it's a unique that you would find so often in a story. You get to hear and really feel a blind man point of view. It's a great story and I love it. best wishes on your entry :)
zepharo zepharo 3 months ago
wow, this is so different and unique, I love it. I figure it's hard to write a blind main character. She doesn't see what other do and therefor her point of view is different  and describing everyday life like it takes talent. good job:)
5sosturtle 5sosturtle 4 months ago
wow. just wow. this is really unique  Im so excited to have such a great writer critiquing my book :)
Mrs_Nagani Mrs_Nagani 4 months ago
I absolutely adored this! Guess who's going to be reading on? Me!
living_to_write living_to_write 4 months ago
I really liked the premise of this story and the feel of it! I'll have to read more to develop my overall response to it but so far so good!

Good luck in the competition! 

If you have time, do you mind checking out my short story, 'Breaking Free'. It would mean a lot to me! Thanks!