Drag Out
After that serious note in the previous chapter... What I find slightly off putting *understatement of the chapter* is when they drag out the book for SO LONG. Like, say the interesting plot ends with a perfect ending at chapter 30. Okay... BUT THEN. BAM! There's like five new chapter updates about their third world problems.
For eg.
CHAPTER 30
And they lived happily ever after with their beautiful children. Finally happy to put their miserable past behind them....
FIVE CHAPTERS LATER
"We ran out of food honey!" She said sadly.
He frowned," We'll have to go to the shop now."
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Yeah exaggeration to the max, but you get my drift. It's totally cool if it's a much loved book, but when it's not. Just tell the author to go into a corner and think about what they're doing. Actually don't. That's mean.
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Reading Turn Offs
Non-FictionYou know those little things some writer do that just... Are a reading turn off? You know... The kind of thing that makes you want to stop reading... Yeah. I hate it too. So, if you're a writer who wants to make it out there in the Wattpad world of...
