Tankard of Tales

And I got my dog from the Dog Pond?!?

A funny story based on my childhood and a family dog that kept on running.

We are improving with the editing. I'm still working on my confidence, though this time I'd sort of wrote a script, so my story is a little clearer. On the other hand, I was reading some parts. More practice. Anyway, please tell me about your thoughts and ideas for improvements. Thanks.