Roommates

The end.

It's over guys.

I originally wrote this story in 2013 when I was in my first semester at University. I didn't take much or any of my experiences from that and put it into this story though. I did make two friends who were roommates in a different dorm from me and they didn't get a long at all after a couple of weeks. It even got violent between them two, I remember one of them hitting the other right in front of the R.A. (I don't even remember what the difference is between an R.A. and a R.D. anymore). So they had to get a whole new room each, apart from each other. It was definitely an experience that first semester.

After reading this for the umpteenth time I've noticed that my writing has definitely improved some since this story. I see that I didn't dwell into much detail, this could have been a way longer story. But I wrote this story as I went, no brainstorming or anything. I even remember where I was. The friend I mentioned earlier, we were chilling in her dorm and she was at her desk doing homework and I was in a chair by the door and I stayed there most of the day, until night typing this whole story. I think I wrote it all then and there! If not then at least 85% of it! Which at the time was pretty crazy and something that I can't even do to this day.

For the longest time I was proud of myself for having written this because I thought I did so well at juggling 4 different personalities between the guys. Which was my aim. I feel like they all sound different from one another.

This is also probably the only and last story you will see on my page that deals mostly with a heterosexual love interest/relationship. I deal more with writing m/m romances now.

If you guys couldn't tell my favorite character is Kivon, I had fun writing him and his love problems with Stephani. I also love Jackson, he's cute. Javier was a riot and I also had fun writing about him, tapping into his thoughts, and his little rivalry with Kivon. I didn't put much effort into Terrance's character because I wasn't too focused on or interested in him and I feel that it shows in the story.

Yes, I've noticed that the story ends pretty abruptly but I realized that this is one of those stories that could have went on and on and on. I had to find a way to close it out somehow, I figure by the end of the first semester. It could have ended a lot better but... oh well.

I've never thought hard about writing a part 2. And I'm still not thinking about it. I'm kind of passed these characters. I didn't write this story with in mind of continuing it in different parts, like a series. Once I finished it, at the time, I was satisfied with it. And I've been happy with it for years until recently because I realize now some faults with the story that I mentioned earlier.

I do hope that you guys somewhat enjoyed this. I'm not saying that my writing has gotten much better from this (I still suck at details) but I can see an improvement.

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