Before i start (again)

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Hello. This is my book, my first actual book. If you could give me constructive criticism or anything, that'd be great. I'm probably going to be way to scared to actually publish any chapters, but let me know what you think of the ones I do publish. I'm kinda hoping that this'll be a good story that might make people engaged, but that's kinda hard when you're as bad a writer as I am. Usually all my stories I write end up being trash, so I guess someone should get the garbage can ready.

Regular publishing is very unlikely, sorry :/

I have published this first page before, but I'm recreating the story so I hope you like it better the second time round.
Constructive Criticism is Welcomed and Encouraged.

Enjoy if you want, I won't tell you what to do

:)

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