thoughts on thoughts ... my take on haiku / senryu

Subway Stories (1)

Subway Stories (1)

shoulder to shoulder

I know how a sardine feels

please, roll back the top

blank faces, watch, staring

train is late again, pissed off

she’s going to jump

lady on the bench

I don’t think she’s asleep, punks

just stole her handbag

the train is on time

my daughter’s birthday today

what the hell? We’ve stopped

there she is again

oh my God, she smiled at me

my face is burning