My Mate Is My English Teacher?!?!? (Watty Awards)

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Chapter 1 sample :

His hands move to my shirt, pulling it over my head, "Umm... Austin..." I say nervously

"Mhmmm" He says as he tries to unhook my bra strap. 

"I don't know if i'm ready... maybe we can talk or play a game instead" We are in the backseat of his black Hummer making out and things were starting to get a little bit heated. This happens to be my older brothers best friend Austin, he wanted to give me a ride home and then he began confessing about how pretty he thought I was and how he wanted to have something special with me. This summer we have been hanging out alot and he's being really sweet to me. He has been my brothers best friend since they met in 6th grade, I have had a crush on him since then. He never acknowledged my presence until this summer, he would kiss me alot and hold my hand all the time. He treated me so sweet and I began liking him more and more. We would make out and stuff and touch but nothing like this.

"You like me right?" He asked 

"I do" I whispered. "I like you alot...."

"Ok then whats the problem?" He asked impatiently

"I just..... I don't think I want to do this..."

He started to get angry "So have you been toying with me all this time?.... leading me on just so you could blow me off?" he asked getting really upset. I didn't want to make him upset, I really wanted him to like me.

"I'm so sorry Austin, I didn't.... I don't want you to be upset with me... i'm sorry" He tucked my hair behind my ear.

"If your really sorry then show me" he said while showing me a charming smile. 

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- Chioma <333