Teen fiction reviews by Laly13 Vol. 1(Requests closed)

review #38: Someone Else's Fairytale

author: EmilyMahTippetts

rating: PG-13

read it if: you like fictional famous people

plot:

Hollywood A-lister, Jason Vanderholt, falls for everygirl, Chloe Winters, who hasn't bothered to see most of his movies. She is the woman every other woman in America is dying to be, but it just isn't her fairytale.

review:

Now, live from my room, is pros and cons!

-First pro is the setting of the place: New Mexico,USA. No overused places to see people!

-Second is that though I'm not very fond of Mexico(no offense to mexicans or lovers of the country), I love their food, and here is shown a lot of it

-And last pro is that there's currently a mystery that is like the "Clue" game: is extremely unknown the responsible for everything

-First con is that this seems cliche: the famous guy who falls in love with a girl that is hard to get. In case you didn't know, I see that in fanfics on a daily basis

-And last is that this story can be dragging if you're not very interested in it

With a kind of cliche but straight to the point plot,good grammar, a little slow development,latin presence(shoutout to all the latina sisters!)...read it if you're really really interested in this story

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. Though it isn't the eight wonder of the world, I'm still reading it and looking forward to grow a liking to it. I know this is a published book in Amazon, but I'm in the group of broke people who can't pay for books,so I hope you can post more chapters soon. Keep writing and take care ;)

I don't have goodbye words, so I just hope you enjoyed this hehe. Comment,share,vote,follow,if you're a directioner read my fanfic reviews book vol.1 and vol.2, and if you have a story,share it here or message me ;)