Scary party - blueice765

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Hey everyone!

This is a poem that I've written.

It's called: Scary party

I know that it might be a little bit confusing...

It's a little bit creative...

but please try and give you opinion about it.

Thanks for reading!

With kind regards,

blueice765

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Scary party

I couldn't believe,

That on this Sunday's eve,

The ghosts held a party

In my house.

At 10 pm they knocked with the door handle,

While carrying a candle.

Everyone was quite,

Even the mouse.

I opened the door.

I was shocked and many things more.

I couldn't believe,

That just happened to me.

They stared at me: creepy!

I felt a little sleepy,

When they floated inside

And took the door key.

I stared at them dumbfound.

This was my ground!

They had no right,

To be here!

They ignored my shouting

And I started pouting.

Finally,

I drew back in fear.

It was just so scary to watch them,

while they partied until 7 am.

And flew,

Through all the walls.

I looked at the mouse while crying.

He started sighing.

And didn't return

My calls.

At 7 am the ghosts went away,

I didn't want them to stay.

So,

I was happy again.

You know,

You should be careful too,

Because you never know who,

Is standing on your doorstep

At 10.

Even I couldn't believe,

That on this Sunday's eve,

The ghosts held a party,

In my house.

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