So this is a story a friend of mine wrote, and he wants to know if it's any good. I think so, so here it is:
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Jonathan smiled as his wife walked through the door. They had a big house, good jobs and each other. What more could they want? She put the groceries on the table and ran towards him. She was running in slow motion, her long hair whipping around her face as she bounced up and down. They opened their arms for an embrace, they were so close, but then something happened.
He woke up.
