love is in the air (a Princeton love story)

its 8:14 am

you Pov: walking home from your friends house, theres smoke everywhere in the sky. You see its coming from a house in the neighborhood, you get closer and you see that its your house, you start to run over their.

fireman: please stay back!

you: but this is my house!!

fireman: im sorry its not safe.

you: weres my mom!? and dad! (your an only child)

fireman: they have bin rushed to a hospital, ill call a police man to escort you there.

*at the hospital*

*doctor comes out*

you: excuse me can you tell me were ryan and kate are!??

doctor: they are in room 203,

cutting him off

you:can i see them

doctor: im sorry.... they were pronounced dead 10 minutes ago

you: :O you break down and start crying

doctor: im really sorry, are you there child?

you: (still crying) yes!

doctor: your mom wanted me to give you this

*pulls out a gold heart shaped neckless*

doctor: they told me to tell you they loved you

you: thank you.....

police man: i have to take you now, is there someone you know that you can stay with?

you:umm yes my aunt but she lives in california 

police man: ill try to get a hold of her.

So! this is my frist story tell me what you think and if you have any suggestions for my story just @ me on twitter :) @fresh_khleofan  thanks and enjoy!!