welcome!  login | sign up   Facebook Connect
 
Read what you like. Share what you write.

Posted by

Just-Krissy

on Oct 22, 2009
Become a fan

(16 of 19)

361


Helllllo! <3
So WOW eh? Last weekend...can you say Wattpad DRAMA! Good thing everything was sorted out though and I owe that to all my fans! Love. lub. lub YOU guys! XoX

Anyways, lets not talk about all that becuase well, its done and over with and I'd rather talk about something alot more up-beat. Like umm.. PART 16! woot woot.. I likey this part.. I do I do.

So You guys are probably getting anxious, you.. I guess I'll shut up now. Teehee. Love you guys lots.n.lots.
PLEASEE VOTE, and of course YOU HAVE to comment no Buts about it. (hehe I just said Butt!) ..Okay that was immature.. Lmao.
Okay well here it is.. Enjoy! <3
XoxoX
Krissy



Part 16


We began to ascend the stairs leading to Derrek's house when we were abruptly stopped by Candise. She stood on the top steps with Tiffany on one side of her and Sammy on the other. Candise had her arms crossed looking down at us with her annoying scrunched up face.

"And what do you looosers think you're doing here?" She asked us while Tiffany and Sammy mimicked her stuck-up facial expression.

"We're coming to the party Candise, so move." Karis jumped in before I could say anything.

"HA! I don't think soo; this is a senior's only kind of party."

"We were invited." Karis barked back.

"I don't care WHO invited you, you're not welcome here." Candise insisted.

"Derrek invited us and this is his house so get the fuck out of the way Candise!" I finally jumped in as I took another step up. I was now standing face to face with Candise, staring at her with daring eyes.

She looked at me with amusement, "Ohh look here girls, Shy-loner girl thinks she's tough." She laughed as Tiffany and Sammy joined in following anything Candise said like two obedient dogs. "Well, first of all little girl, Derrek would never be caught TALKING to a sophomore never mind inviting three of them to his party."

The front door opened as the noise from inside surrounded us, people's laughter, music, joyful yelling; all the sounds that indicated a teen party. We all looked over to the door and saw Derrek coming out of the house. He was wearing the same clothes he had on today. Blue jeans with a Pittsburgh Steelers hooded sweat shirt on and even though I would have drowned in that sweater it was tight against his overly large muscles. At this point everyone sitting on the porch was now watching us closely.

"Your right Candise." Derrek said, his voice deeply low. "I didn't invite those three sophomores here." He paused for dramatic effect.

"I knew it-" Candise began before Derrek caught her off.

"I invited Stasee here...Why the short-stuff and nerd boy came is beyond me." Derrek said while eyeing both Karis and Brandon.

"Derrek!" Candise said with amusement. "You know 'nerd boy' is Damen's brother!"

Just hearing his name brought a sharp feeling into my stomach. Anxiously I looked around hoping he would just appear out of nowhere. I knew it was stupid, I mean I was supposed to be trying to get over him and yet he was the only thing I could think about. He was the only reason I even came to this party, wishing and hoping that MAYBE he would be here. Maybe I'd be able to at least see him if not anything else.

"I don't care!" Derrek replied to Candise making her giggle.

"And you know we're standing RIGHT here!" Brandon announced angrily as both Candise and Derrek looked back down at Brandon with disgust. Seriously, those two were perfect for each other, both the most stuck-up, 'think they're the best' kids in McLennan.

"Whatever, we're leaving!" I gritted through my teeth. "Let's go guys."

"Wait!" Derrek called out. "You don't have to leave Stasee, I invited you!" He said it like it was a good thing, like I wanted to be there and would ditch my friends just to go to his 'party'.

I turned around to face him, "I'm sorry Derrek, but it's either ALL of us, or NONE of us."

He looked over at the seniors watching us and then at Candise who had the 'Yah-right-like-he'll-fall-for-that-one' look on her face. Derrek then looked back at me, "Fine, you guys can all come."

Candise's mouth dropped as she turned to look at Derrek, "But Derrrrekkkk..." She whined.

"Shut up Candise! Fuck you're annoying."

I took one step towards the house before stopping and looking back up at Derrek. "And say you're sorry to my friends."

"WHAT?!" He snapped back.

"Say you're sorry for calling Karis 'short stuff' and Brandon 'nerd boy', or fuck it...We're leaving." I tested him.
/ 4 Next Page

Comments & Reviews ^top


Login to post your comment.


oo who is it that asked her are you ok??? :) i love this!! trent is bing way over protective right there thoughh.

gingersnap88...
Nov 19, 2009 13:05
reply spam


i love her brother

xoxo

17xoxo
Nov 19, 2009 08:35
reply spam


this is awesome!!! but protective brother much? god give the girl some space. and luv the cliff hanger!! ur great at those!! thank god the next chapter is already loaded or i would diiiieeeee!! lol luv this!! u r awesome!!

peteefua
Nov 17, 2009 13:41
reply spam


ohhhhh interesting!!!

emziiella
Nov 05, 2009 17:47
reply spam


this is an amazing story....not good, exceptionally amazing!!!! hehehe!!! love this part and the hole story:)

beeEaSt
Nov 03, 2009 23:08
reply spam


Loved It. You have an amazing talent!! :)

MarzBar123
Nov 02, 2009 19:31
reply spam


soooooooooooo good!!!! girl u rock

secretperson
Oct 31, 2009 06:12
reply spam


dis story is ssssoooo good ur very talented omg
i really cant wait till part 17 OMG i love dis story

Ally12345
Oct 30, 2009 18:13
reply spam


damn thats mean now we have to wait so write it please!!!!!!!!!!!1

frenchy21
Oct 30, 2009 13:57
reply spam


damn cliff hanger!! you better rite more :( I LOVE IT

Chatterbox96...
Oct 30, 2009 04:49
reply spam

Recommended


bitch barbie... just happens to be my sister

How Could You Do This To Me?? Chapter One

bitch barbie...just happens to be my sister part 2 updated version

Frozen Hearts (chapter 1)

The mistakes we make Part 2

high school drama 2,000 no wait 2,000,000 part 2

Our Totally Crazy 80's Party Drama pt 4