In Dreams

Hey  people this is my first time writing a story so just bare with me, Im just going to put a paragraph up and see if anyone likes.  So please vote and comment.

There’s blood everywhere on the windows, walls, more importantly me, instantaneous I was awake with a shrill cry, saturated in sweat.  The Dark figure at the scene of the accident what is it? Why am I trembling with uncontrollable fear?  This nightmare that I’m having plagues me every night since the accident two years ago which claimed the life of my whole family. My father and twin brother gone, in as much as I want to forget the images, it’s the reflection of my mother’s face in the pool of blood, which is forevermore sketched in my mind.  I just hope by the time that I figure it all out it’s not too late for me, and closure is nothing but me taking my own life. It has crossed my mind a few times. However, right now I have other matters to attend to like making sure that I make it to school on time before the first-period  bell rings, so that I don’t receive another detention.