This Feeling (Mindless Behavior love story )

Please Wake UP

Chapter 8 ? I think anyway story time

(Issa Chanel took yaya to the hospital and called every one )

{Hospital 10:00}

Jazz: (walks over to issa and Chanel) what the fuck happened

Issa: I don't know I left her with this trick (points to chanel )

Chanel : (smiling ) I don't know poor baby must've had the wrong thing to drink

Kay&Jazz: oh hell naw

Jazz:(trying to swing on her but prod is holding her ) Craig crippen if you do not let Me the fuck go I will kill you

Prod : (did as he was told )

Jazz:(steps in her Face ) look bitch I don't know what's beef with my best friend and you but if she does not wake up I will make your life a living hell

Kay: you can bet on that

{Doctor comes in the waiting room }

Doctor: For Yariel Logan

*Everyone except chanel stands*

Kay: is she ok ?

Doctor: what ever she took or put in her system was really death threating she is not responding very well but I think she'll be ok

Ray: you think what you mean you think (p.o.v lord if you let her wake up I swear to you that I'll do everything in my power to make sure it never happens again )

Doctor: she really isn't responding so we will just have to step out on faith

Jazz: (crying ) my best friend

Prod:(comforts her ) it'll be ok

Kay&Roc: (hugging each other trying to stay strong )

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(Prince walks in )

Prince: what the hell happened (p.o.v all I see is everybody crying )

Issa: hey man we'll tell ya later

Chanel : (walks over to prince ) I did it she was stealing ray and my boyfriend so I put something in her drink i don't know what it was Though

Prince : I don't even know who you 2 are (p.o.v. : what the hell )

Issa: I'm issa I was planning on taking yaya back to New Orleans because well I'm not sure why

Chanel: im chanel she was here with ray and she caught me kissing him so I guess she was mad

Prince : wassup issa (gives him dap) (turns to Chanel ) I got one word for you why ?

Chanel: (walks away)

Prince : will she be ok ?

Ray :we don't know (slight tear) doc can I see her ??

Doctor: go right ahead (points down the hall )

Ray:(walks in the room ) hey yaya you probably can't hear me but

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{Yaya's Dream}

Yaya: where am I ?

???: in your heart

Yaya: what the devil (raises eye brow )

???: (laughs and  face appears )

Yaya: Derrick??

{Derrick is yari's ex boy friend}

Derrick :in the flesh

Yaya: why am I here

Derrick : you need to let go of all the hurt you felt all the pain from your parents let's it go its clouding your judgment on ray you like him you are just very scared to show it because you might get hurt

Yaya: maybe you're right

Derrick: I know I hurt you and I'm sorry but you don't need me you never did but girlllll I got me a fine one (laughs ). You're still pretty

Yaya: (laughs ) alright d

Derrick: I love you baby girl (kisses her cheek )

Yaya: I love you to (crying)

Derrick : stop crying yari (fades away ).

{Dream Over }
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Yaya: (p.o.v: I hear voices is that ray ?? )

Ray: (pacing ) I like you  I need you yes I like  you yaiel Logan you never told me your middle name omg yari yaya please wake up

Yaya:(waking up) janay

Ray: (stops & starts screaming)DOCTOR JAZZ ROC PRINCE ISSA KAY PROD NURSE SOMEBODY!! SHE WOKE UP !!!

EVRYBODY : (SCREAMING )

yaya: not to be crazy or anything why are y'all yelling like I was dead and returned

Doctor: well I wouldn't say it like that but what a miracle

Jazz&Kay: I missed you bestie (kisses her )

Yaya: um I can't breathe you 2 are kissing me to hard

Kay: (laughs ) I'm sorry (letting go )

Jazz:(still hugging and kissing )

Yaya: jazmyn karoline if you don't let me go

Jazz: (gets up ) girl my government name

Prod: (walks over & hugs prod ) hey sis you ok ??

Yaya: yes I am

Jazz: (holds Prod's hand )

Yaya: I see y'all !!!!!!

Roc: (holds Kay's hand ) you see us to

Yaya: (laughing) I see y'all

Roc&Prod:we gonna go get some dinner

Jazz&Kay: we gonna go see when you get released then go with the boys

Issa: lemme go take this brat home (points to Chanel) I'll go back for dinner

Chanel:(mumbles) nigga fuck you

Yaya; (laughing )

Ray:I guess its just me and you

Yaya: (pats the bed ) come sit next to big daddy Y

Ray: big daddy ?? Girl what ?? (Laughs) and no dead people been on that bed girl you crazy

Yaya:(laughing ) Im pretty sure they clean the beds

Ray: (does a funny shrug )ight

Yaya: so you and chanel ??

Ray; no more of that it was a long time ago (P.o.v : I only got eyes for you )

Yaya: that's cool (laughing )

Ray: yariel can I tell you something

Yaya: yea shoot

{Shoot means go ahead }

Ray: I like you a lot and I'll prove to you I'm worth your time (kisses her )

Yaya;( pulls back falling asleep)

Ray; Yariel Janay Smith yea I like that (falls asleep )

????: (looking in hospital window ) not for long

Kelly:(p.o.v their gonna hate me after this )

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Who was the voice where. Did prince go?

Find out next chapter

Rayray is so sweet