New and Improved!

Chapter 1 - New and Improved!

 Emily Saunders has not had the best life. Her mother died when she was eight, while giving birth to her sister. When her mother died, her father was devastated and he would stay in his office working all the time. She hardly talked or saw him, it was as if they were living in separate houses, but who could complain. Which 15-year-old do not wish there parents would leave them alone and do whatever they want. Despite all the bad things that could happen in her life Emily was a straight A student which a lot of people would tease her about like calling her a teacher pet or freak or nerd.

Emily new she was not as pretty as the cheerleaders were and she was fine with that, although she was tease, she saw it as a normal life. But one night Derek who is the quarterback was having a party and invited the entire school and yes even Emily. Emily was not much of a party goer so she said she would stay home but Hannah who was her best friend and a cheerleader—yeah I know what your thinking how did Emily the nerd become friends with the pretty Hannah Watson that every guy wanted to date… I tell you later—

“You have to come! It's going to be the party everyone going to talking about” Hannah partially shouted

“Fine but I’m only going because you will never stop talking about the party and how I missed out so much” Emily said rolling her eyes

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It was 12 and it seemed as though no one was even close to leaving this party anytime soon.

“hey Hannah, its getting pretty late so I think I’m going walk home”

“okimgoingtoslee—“ Hannah feel down on the couch face first. Emily did warn her not to get too drunk

Emily left her there and walked out, she knew she would be fine since it was her house.

As Emily was nearing her house when she heard a noise behind her

“H-hello” She asked her voice shaking

She picked up her pace starting to walking faster, then she felt something on the back or her head and everything went black.

Looking back Emily regrets going to that party but mainly she regrets walking home that night.

That night

That one NIGHT

Changed Emily’s Life

 She never told her dad what happened that night, and she never plans on tell him or anyone, all he know is that she was missing for an entire day.

Her dad was furious,and two weeks later he decide she should go to YP Boarding School.

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It is now a year later and Emily has changed completely, she is no longer than nerd that people can push around and tease. Emily was fierce and dangerous to mess with. In the past two years 17 year old Emily grew into her looks. She is 5’7, slender, she has brown hair that reached her back midway and piercing green eyes that can make any guy do whatever she wants. She stills gets called names but its not nerd or freak she has upgraded to being called a slut or whore. Usually people would get offended by this but it does not offended her in the least. You could almost say she loves it.

So here she is in her dorm packing her stuff to go back home. A smile begins to form in the corner of her lips as she think about all the boys she can seduce there.

An this is how the NEW Emily Saunders was born

“LOOK OUT BOYZ EMILY SAUNDERS IS ABOUT TO CRASH THIS PARTY

So what do you think like it hate it. Please comment because I want to know if I should continue or not

Also I will not be writing in a narrative speech I will be doing Emily’s POV for the most part

Please your comments and votes mean everything to me

 

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