Presenting 𝑷𝒓𝒐𝒑𝒊𝒕𝒊𝒐𝒖𝒔 𝑷𝒓𝒐𝒎𝒑𝒕𝒔 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝑷𝒐𝒆𝒕𝒔 ★
A cheerful contest where imagination runs wild!
Dip your quill in some ink and watch the words paint themselves on the parchment to create a storytelling masterpiece.
Come inside a...
The way you started your poem already had me sold. The direct invitation for the reader to "Come sit by the fire" sparks a vivid image of a now-old female lover, flames flickering across her wrinkled face, passing down her bittersweet folktale to her audience (at least, that's what I saw in my mind's eye).
Besides a capitalization error, your grammar is spotless. If only you had embedded more of your lines with powerful and expressive diction—greatly enhancing your imagery—my approval would have skyrocketed. Consider the following example:
Our bond was carved from loyalty Etched into stars and stone A bond I shall cherish for eternity No matter how many opposed
Nevertheless, your poem is captivating and well-structured, wonderfully seasoned with a dark, tragic atmosphere.
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