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Title: The Baby Doll Project: Book 1

Author: 1Dlove97

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Okay right down to business, first of all I find the plot extremely cliche and overused (Girl gets paired with 'bad boy' to do a fake baby project) and the book is really lacking in commas. It's really confusing when there is no commas , for example ' I threw on some sweats and a fitted t-shirt not really in the mood....' now to me that makes me think the t-shirt is not really in the mood. But a simple comma shows it's the main character who's not in the mood.

From what i read the book is mainly dialogue and action, it could really do with some description. Overall the book could do with an editor and a sprinkle of creativity.

Rating

Book: 4/5

Cover: 6