Chris_critique

I leave wattpad for only a year only to find out that @ironnerve and @chris_creative have left...what is this place coming to?

Hi, could you check my story? i need honest critique. Thankss :D
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/1037260-my-life-of-thievery-and-deceit

Hey guys i've been offline for quite a while now due to internet problems but i promise not to disappoint none of you guys. So the critique is back in action.send those stories in.

Could you read my story Shadow Zone?
          Genre: Action/Adventure
          Chapters: 15 (they aren't that long and I don't expect you to read them all lol)
          Summary: When the Bulgarian Kozloduy nuclear power plant explodes the EU sends in an Expeditionary force to aid the local government. The plot first follows a single squad but then splits into 2-3 storylines, each one connected to the rest.
          Link: http://www.wattpad.com/955060-shadow-zone

Hello! could you check out my sci fi?
          Blood war Slave!  NOT what you think! Action packed sci fi, long, complicated (mistakes will be edited  with some help soon enough). Please check t out. It is far from cliche!
          THANK YOU!
          http://www.wattpad.com/797435-blood-war-slave 

http://www.wattpad.com/864005-the-romantic-escapade

Can you read mine and tell me what you think
          
          The Alpha Who Saved Me

hey, can you check out some of my poems?

Could you please take a look at my prologue to 'City Of the Dead' its for English and i tried really hard but i heard you give good feedback and i was wondering if you could just check it for me? :) <3

Mind checking out my stuff?