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Can you read my story? Any comments are appreciated(:

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Can you please read my story? Comments are encouraged! Thankyou(: 

Can you please read my story? Any comments are appreciated. Thankyou! (:

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Can you read my story?? Any type of criticism is fine. Thanks(: