Tanhaiyan-shraman version

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mohhabat nazdeekeon se nahin tanhaiyon se badhti hai Tanhaiyan-a great love story portrayed amazingly by bar... Mais

Character Description {EDITED}
MEET SHRAVAN AND SUMAN [Chapter-1] {EDITED}
More of shravan and suman [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
shraman's affection towards each other [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
terrace romance [Chapter -2] {EDITED}
hospital rush [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
Flower of Love Blossoms [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
what's hidden [Chapter-3] {EDITED}
The garden surprise [chapter 3 contd.]
sometimes its good to fight [chapter-4]
suman's past story [chapter 4 contd.]
Shravan to rescue [chapter 4 contd.]
namik's question
new cover!!!
Is that a new danger??[chapter 5]
Misha-happening [chapter 5 contd.]
misha's unveiled [chapter 5 contd.]
Together Forever?? [Chapter---6]
MIS-UNDERSTANDINGS!! [CHAPTER 6 Contd.]
BREAKING DOWN!! [CHAPTER-6 Contd.]
IS THIS IT??! [Chapter 6 contd.]
THE UNKNOWN THREE MONTHS [CHAPTER 7]
DEV BANERJEE?? [Chapter 7 contd.]
RECONCILING!!! [Chapter 7 contd.]
TUG OF WAR!💢! OR LOVE?♥? [Chapter 8]
REAL IDENTITY??[CHAPTER 8 CONTD.]
ENGAGEMENT [Chapter 8 contd.]
ESCAPING UDAIPUR [Chapter 8 Contd.]
OFF TO MUMBAI👋🏼 [Chapter 9]
Sweet Late Night Talks [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Pieces of evidence?-1 [Chapter 9 Contd.]
A Short Reunion [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Guess what!!!
dev in Mumbai? [Chapter 9 Contd.]
HELLO?! [Chapter 10]
Suman's wedding! [Chapter 10 contd.]
ARE WE BREAKING UP? [Chapter 10 contd.]
Giving up?! [chapter 10 contd.]
Re-kindling Relations [chapter 10 contd.]
Mehendi ceremony [Chapter 11]
Where's shanaya? [Chapter 11 contd.]
All well that ends well! [Chapter 11 contd.]
Happy Ending [Epilogue]

FACE TO FACE [Chapter 7 contd.]

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recap-reconciling

next morning,

shraman were sleeping peacefully when the sunshine hit their faces hard. shravan got up disturbed by the sunlight. he rubbed his eyes and saw the most beautiful view in front of his eyes. suman was sleeping cuddling to him as if her life depended on him. he kissed her forehead awaking her

suman-(sleepy voice)-good morning

she cuddled more into him. he held her close smiling and lying down to her again

shravan-good morning.....by the way madam any plan about getting up??

suman-five mins more

shravan-sumo dev aa gaya hoga chalo get up

suman frowned on hearing this. she looked at him questioningly still not getting up. shravan understood her question.

shravan-arey tumhe sajj sawar ke jaana chahiye na apne hone wale pati ke saamne

suman-mera pati mujhe jhalli wale dressup mein bhi utna hi pyaar karega jitna girly dress up mein karta hai

shravan-(acting surprised)-haww sumo....tumne bataya nahin tum dev se love marriage kar rahi ho!!

suman-kya??....dev se??...love marriage??....ewww

shravan-eww??...come on woh itna bhi bura nahin hoga??

suman-itna bura hai nahin but agar kisi ke pass the most desirable and adorable man ho toh woh kisi aur ke paas kyun jaye??

shravan-so according to you i am the most desirable and adorable right??

suman-sirf mere case mein...dare you flirt with anyone else

shravan- ok fine....don't back off later

suman-later??....wait don't tell me you're planning to do something like that in front of dev??

shravan-yes genius....now get up else i won't be able to control myself....i have to rush to the washroom

suman-eww!!

suman left him and he rushed to washroom closing the door behind. she laughed hard seeing his antics.

almost everyone was at the dining table. just then pushkar entered the hall taking his seat

pushkar-good morning everyone

mamiji-good mowrning beta....acha tumne suman ko kahin dekha hai??

pushkar-nahin mamiji....ek minute main abhi aaya

pushkar excused himself to call shravan. he knew mamiji was going to check on suman if she wasn't downstairs soon.

on the call,

pushkar-saale hai kahan tu??

shravan-kya ho gaya??....phir koi lafda hai kya??

pushkar-hai nahin ho jayega...mamiji sumo ko dhoond rahi hai

shravan-yaar hum aa hi rahe the neeche ki sumo ke perr mein sprain aa gaya....don't worry main lata hun usey

pushkar-careful....aur dekhna tum dono ko koi dekhe naa

shravan-fine

shravan ended the call and helped suman walk through the corridor till the stairs.

suman-(wincing)-ahh...shravan bohot dard ho raha hai

shravan-maine kaha tha bandaron ki tarah idhar udhar bhago.....bhugto ab

suman-ek toh mujhe lagi hai upar se tum suna rahe ho...chodo i can manage

they were fighting still half way through the stairs. suman left his support and started to walk down on her own

shravan-sumo zyada lag jayegi

suman-don't worry i can handle

she was at the last second step when she tripped and fell on the floor. shravan literally ran down the stairs to reach her. everyone saw her tripping and ran to check whether she was injured much

shravan-(yelling through the stairs)-sumo!!

shravan was scanning her whole body to find any injury if possible. all were smiling watching them like this except one person. it was mamiji

shravan-(scolding her with concern)-kaha tha na lag jayegi....sunti kahan ho kisi ki tum

shravan picked suman up and walked upstairs to her room. mamiji was fuming seeing her happy. rohan was sitting on his seat when mamiji interrupted him

mamiji-rohan yeh ladka kaun tha??

rohan-woh shravan bhai hai....di ka b....

rohan controlled his tongue and realized who he was talking to. he changed the word he was going to use

rohan-best friend!!

mamiji-yeh ladka??....suman ka best farend??

rohan-toh kya woh dost bhi aapse pooch ke banayegi??

rohan was irked by her presence and left without having his breakfast.

mamiji-rohan wapas aao yahan....hai bhagwan yeh dono bhai behen kisi ki sunte kahan hai??....humari hi mati maari gayi thi ki inhe apne saath rakha

shravan was massaging suman's ankle in her room with much concern. suman was controlling her smile seeing his concern

shravan-zyada dard ho raha hai??

suman-haan bohot zyada....parr mere perr main nahin...(smiling and pointing on his heart)....tumhare dil mein...hai na??

shravan-tum meri baat manti kyun nahin ho...you know for a change??

suman-tum mujhpe chillana band bhi kar sakte ho for a change!!

both smiled realizing that they were the same persons they fell in love with.

shravan-i guess hum dono kabhi change ho hi nahin sakte

suman-we are the best like this....humein change hone ki zaroorat hi nahin hai♥

they were laughing their hearts out when they heard a knock. shravan went to the door and opened it. the person who was standing on the door gave him a huge shock. it was dev.

dev-sorry bro...actually i am looking for my fiance suman...i think i got into the wrong room....do you know where her room is??

suman heard his voice and knew who it was. shravan was covering her which didn't let dev see her. shravan stood like a statue without replying anything

dev-(waving hand in front of his face)-hello bro i am speaking to you??

shravan-(coming out of his thoughts)-huh...sorry...suman right??

dev-yeah do you know where her room is??

shravan-actually i am her friend...aur yeh uska hi room hai...woh bahar gayi hai and i was finding for a file of mine...toh i came in

dev-ohh

shravan-yeah...you want me to convey some message of yours??....else i'll let you know when she'll be back

dev-great...i am in the 3rd room from left on the second floor...let me know when she returns...by the way nice meeting you...

shravan-shravan...i am shravan....nice to meet you too

dev-myself dev...see you soon

shravan-sure

suman was hearing all this carefully without making a single noise. shravan locked the door and came back to her. she was stupefied. 

shravan-sumo??

suman didn't respond. shravan shook her hard.

shravan-sumo!!

suman-huh??..abhi kya hua??

shravan-what do you mean kya hua??...dev aaya tha...he wants to meet you...go and meet him

suman-kya??...have you lost it??...main bhaag rahi hun shravan...if you want you can join me too

shravan-bhaag rahi ho??....oh the run away bride....nice...thanks but i am not interested to join...you carry on

suman-pagal ho??...main kya khud se shaadi karke khud hi bachhe paida karun??...come with me

shravan-(holding her by waist)-hmm not  a bad idea...but...(whispering near her lips)...agar tum nahin bhi bhagogi na toh bhi humari shaadi hogi and hum dono milke bache paida karenge....don't worry☻

shravan said with a mischievous blink and suman felt blood rushing to her cheeks

suman-(hitting his arms lightly)-shut up shravan....i didn't mean that literally

shravan-but i exactly mean what i said...but woh sab baad mein abhi...(taking his phone out and pecking her lips)...we have a guest to take care of first

shravan called pushkar and he picked it up in a first go.

on the call,

pushkar-hello??

shravan-sabko ikatha kar aur sumo ke room mein aa fast

pushkar-kyun??

shravan-emergency idiot

after some time pushkar and the whole gang was in suman's room except shanaya.

shravan-shanu kidhar hai??

shanaya-(entering with a plate of toast and omelette)-i am here...i am here...and here's the file

suman-tumne abhi tak breakfast nahin kiya shanu??

pushkar-nahin sumo...pure do plate thoose hain isne...phir bhi kha rahi hai...bhukkadi

shravan-oye meri behen ke khaane pe nazar mat laga....aur tu khud kitna bada bhukkad hai yeh sab achhe se jaante hai...especially preeti...kyun??

shanaya-silence please....bhabhi maine bohot pehle breakfast kar liya tha but aapka yeh jo bhai hai na he's starving

suman-rohan??...tune khaya kyun nahin??

rohan-as usual mamiji

shravan-ok guys....kuch time pehele dev aaya tha and he was willing to see sumo...

preeti-sumo tu mill toh nahin gayi na usey??

suman-(sarcastically)-haan main toh uske perr pakad ke usey shashtang pranam kar rahi thi....pagal hai kya??...main kyun milne lagi uss se??

pushkar-thank god...warna tum dono ka milna mushkil ho jaata

suman-pushy you need to give this 6'4" idiot some sense...mujhe bol raha tha sajj sawar ke jaun uss se milne

naira-haan toh??...galat thode hi bola uss ne...pati ke saamne toh waise hi jaana chahiye...i agree with you shravan

shravan-haina??....see sumo

suman-(rolling her eyes)-nayu tu aaj kal kuch zyada hi shravan ki side nahin le rahi

suddenly there was a knock on the door. everyone stood silently and shanaya went to answer the door

shanaya-(annoyingly)-bhai aap??...chill guys...its amol bhai

amol-(pushing shanaya aside)-hello everyone

anaya-(shocked)-tum??

amol-oye tum yahan....waise mere peeche peeche yahan bhi pohonch gayi tum??

anaya-hello mr mujhe koi aur kaam hai bhi ya nahin...tumhare peeche kyun bhaag ne lai main??

everyone was surprised with this new found info

shravan-you know each other??

anaya-no...he was a creep i met at a club....tabse peeche hi padd gaya hai

amol-oh hello agar hum mill hi jaate hain toh isme meri galti??...forget it shanu aa mere saath woh wadera ki case mein teri help chahiye

shravan-(holding her hand)-woh mujhe banerjee wale case mein help kar rahi hai...you help yourself and get lost

amol-(holding her by another side)-woh mujhe wadera wale case mein help karegi...you wait till i get over the case

both the brothers pull shanaya by her hands. she looked pleadingly towards suman to help her

suman-guys leave her....pain hoga usey

both left shanaya's hands. she massaged both her arms which was paining a bit

shanaya-thanks bhabhi mujhe toh laga tha aaj main two piece ho jaungi

amol-oh so you're sumo bhabhi....(hugging her)...nice to meet you...main aapka devar amol

shravan-unfortunately

amol-bhabhi aapki choice itni buri kaise ho sakti hai??

suman-why do you think like that??

amol-nahin aapne iss akdu ko choose kiya toh that's why i asked

rohan-even i have the same thought

shanaya-dare both of you tease my bhai....aur amol bhai wadera wala case do mahine baad hai....i can help you later...banerjee wala case is important right now

amol-tu meri behen hai ya uski??

shravan-of course meri!!...tu jaa na chachi was asking about you

amol-yeh sahi hai mujhe kyun bhaga raha hai tu??...yahan rukunga toh kya tum logo ka plan kharab kar dunga??

shravan-haan...aur tera konsa room hai??

amol-last of this floor

shravan-woh mera room hai....you can't enter

amol-really??...guess what i entered and my clothes are already there

shravan and amol were fighting again. all people were in the room watching this brother duo helplessly.

suman-inn dono se mujhe umeed rakhni bhi nahin chahiye

shanaya-don't worry bhabhi....just wait and watch

shanaya went and hit their heads hard. both looked at shanaya surprised

shanaya-just shut up both of you....bhai dev's already here and we have to plan something remember??

shravan-oh yeah...sorry

amol-dev banerjje's here??....but uski toh shaadi hone wali hain na??....what's there to worry??

anaya-(irritated)-idiot he's getting married to sumo

amol-what??....no wait...like really bhabhi??

shanaya-bhai stop...hum case discuss karein??

shravan-go on

shravan, shanaya and amol discussed the case with all of them. they planned how to expose him and how to make mamiji agree for shraman's marriage when pushkar asked out of nowhere

pushkar-shravan tum dono humesha ese hi ladte ho??....i mean ghar pe bhi??

shanaya-bhai don't ask....ghar pe main locked rehti hun....bahar aayi toh koi na koi utha ke le jaata hai

preeti-seriously??...inn dono ko problem kya hai aapas mein??

shanaya-aapas mein nahin...inki problem main hun....before i was born they were inseparable according to mom but when i was born they started fighting for me...like who'll spend more time with me....and they still fight on that

naira-aww that's cute!!

amol and shravan-we're not cute!!

shanaya-bhabhi don't call them cute....they get offended

there was another knock on the door. this time suman went and opened the door.

suman-dev!!...tum yahan achanak??

dev-haan woh main kuch time pehle aaya tha...(looking at the gang behind her)...looks like you're quite busy

suman-not really come

both of them came in and dev took his seat near suman

dev-wow you guys have quite a big group!!

suman-yeah...tum toh pushkar, kartik, rohan, preeti,  naira aur anaya ko jaante hi ho.....this is shanaya, amol and shravan...and guys this is dev my fiance

dev-oh yeah....i met shravan this morning...so kya planning chal rahi thi mere khilaaf??

everyone was shocked by his question. suman smiled nervously at him.

suman-tumhare khilaaf??...aisa toh kuch nahin hai....tumhe kyun laga aisa??

dev-(holding her by waist)-nahin woh mere aane se pehle bohot awazein aa rahi thi and suddenly all went silent...toh i thought...

pushkar-nahin yaar woh we were discussing about engagement and sangeet preparations, wanna join us??

dev-no you guys carry on....i have a meeting here so i have to leave....suman take care...(kissing her forehead)...i'll see you soon...love you...bye

he went out and shravan was going to beat him blue and black for touching his sumo when held him back

amol-(stopping him)-shravan stop

shravan-amol chhod mujhe...how dare he touch my sumo??

amol-shravan calm down....he is her legal fiance...we can't stop him

shravan-(pushing him away)-tu kya bolna chahta hai??...i'll let him touch her in front of my eyes??

amol-we are working on it na??...patience brother patience

shravan-to hell with your patience....agar yeh shaadi wala ghar na hota na...i swear i would have killed him

both were fighting when they heard a thud sound. everyone's attention went towards the noise to see sumo unconscious on bed

shravan-(rushing to her)-sumo??...preeti iski medicines

suman gets conscious after few minutes. everyone sighed relief seeing her fine

shravan-you okay??

suman-much better....guys just leave me alone for some time

shravan-koi kahin ja raha....except amol

suman-shravan what part of "leave me alone" did you not understand??

shravan-every part....now just shut up...naira tum doctor ko call karo

suman-shravan i am fine

shravan-(yelling at her)-i said shut up

amol-(closing her ears by his hands)-chill brother!!...don't worry bhabhi...iska screw thoda loose hai...kabhi kabhi khisak jaata hai...but don't you worry....aapka devar bilkul bhi annoying nahin hai

suman-(murmuring to herself)-pata hai mujhe

amol-did say something??

suman-no...guys tum logon ko kuch kaam nahin hai??...come on yaar....shanaya yahin hai you all go and start preparations

shravan-i said main kahin nahin jaa raha

suman-and i said main doctor se nahin mill rahi if you don't move out right now

shravan-sumo stop being stubborn!!

suman-same goes for you mr.malhotra now leave everyone!!

rohan jumps on her bed joining her. he hugged a pillow and laid comfortably

rohan-main apni babes ko chhod ke nahin jaane wala

suman-(twisting his ear)-tujhe alag samjhaun??

rohan-ouch...chhod na jaa raha hun...violent insaan

shravan-feelings are mutual bro...aa jaa...you know i am kinda jealous of shanu

rohan-me too

shanaya-mujhe sab sunai de raha hai guys!!

shravan-bye

all left the room leaving shanaya and suman alone. shanaya locked the door.

shanaya and suman-(sighing)-finally peace!!☻

TO BE CONTINUED..........................................................................................................

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END OF CHAPTER 7.....

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