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📚Reading List 📚
❄️The Last Philosopher❄️
❄️The Right To Die❄️
❄️Rich Re:grets❄️
❄️The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth❄️
❄️Rebellion - Prince Of Dawn❄️
❄️Subterra Heart❄️
❄️The Diary Of A Model (The Contract)❄️
❄️To Steal A Weeping Window❄️
❄️The Adventures Of Rel Rel Lost Mirror 2nd Edition❄️
❄️The Edge Of Truth❄️
❄️Machine Heart: A Story Of Mystery And Intrigue❄️
❄️Close Enemies❄️
❄️Dear Myrtle Cove❄️
❄️Reflections Of Choice❄️
❄️Saving Michael❄️
❄️EVAUGHN❄️
❄️False Hate❄️
❄️Outbreak: The First Surge❄️
❄️The Burden of a Secret❄️
❄️Destined Strangers❄️
❄️DELONIX❄️
❄️Tale of the Princess❄️
❄️❀ 𝐍𝐨𝐯𝐚𝐥𝐮𝐧𝐨𝐬𝐢𝐬 ❀ | 18+❄️
❄️Empire: playing dice❄️
❄️The Mind Of A Tipsy Teenager❄️
❄️Return of the Youngest Auclair❄️
❄️US v THEM❄️
❄️The Great Pretende❄️
❄️The Prince and the Punk❄️
❄️Claire: The Diary of A Model 2[The Journey]❄️
❄️Unseen Fragments❄️
❄️Empress Of Self - Ruin❄️
❄️IYO❄️
❄️Tangled Claws❄️
❄️Their Little Princess❄️
❄️Hunted: Destructive Outbreak❄️
❄️Bitter Sweet Affair❄️
❄️Feverish Revenge❄️
❄️FOG OF THE HEART❄️
❄️House Of Zale❄️
❄️Poor in heaven/The lake club❄️
❄️Lie To Me❄️
❄️The Healing Bond❄️
❄️Curse Of Noble Blood❄️
❄️The Prep Diary: How The Prep Became So Preppy❄️
❄️what do we count in a galaxy filled with unlucky Stars?❄️
❄️Of moons and blood❄️
❄️Bloody Royals /18+❄️
❄️Someday, Somewhere, Somehow❄️
❄️Ambrosia Promise❄️
❄️The Lost Chronicles of a Villainess❄️
❄️In The Thorns Of A Castle❄️
❄️The Dream Of Dead❄️
❄️Wrong Planet/ X Together❄️
❄️Rich Man's Ransom // Huening Kai FF✔️❄️
❄️Fated To Be You❄️
❄️Jake Rose The Werewolf❄️
❄️Shadows Of Deceit❄️
❄️The Gap❄️
❄️A Kingdom Of Dreams❄️
❄️Crown Of Spells❄️
❄️Mayapuri- City Of Dreams...❄️
❄️Dungeon❄️
❄️Falling For Jackson Again!❄️
❄️Luna Bloodlust✔️❄️
❄️Best Night Ever❄️
❄️A Touch of Fate❄️
❄️Who Killed Vivrr? ||Tomorrow X Tomorrow❄️
❄️The Lethal Heptagon❄️
❄️How To Survive Murder❄️
❄️The Stalker*Book One*❄️
❄️Love At Dawn❄️
❄️This Is The Fall❄️
❄️Luminaries❄️
❄️Heart Waves❄️
❄️So What If You Love Me?❄️
❄️ViperSong❄️
❄️Guardians Of Heavnsworth❄️
❄️New World Magic❄️
❄️A Kingdom Of Dreams❄️
❄️Not My Little Sister❄️
❄️Stay❄️
❄️Aetheria Falling❄️
❄️1000 Years Of Light❄️
❄️Through Thick And Thin❄️
❄️Auctioned To The Ruthless Billionaire❄️
❄️Finding Love Again❄️
❄️The Beast's Untamed Desire❄️
❄️Solace❄️
❄️In The Night Sky❄️
❄️The Slient Chase❄️
❄️Just Three Days❄️
❄️This Is The way It Goes, I Guess❄️
❄️River Haven Hotel❄️
❄️The Princess And The Fox❄️
❄️Admiring The Light❄️
❄️SHS❄️
❄️The Dragon Emperor❄️
❄️Slate Gray❄️
❄️Their Angel❄️
❄️Veiled Desires❄️
❄️Kendra❄️
❄️Going After The Wrong Guy❄️
❄️Amethyst❄️
❄️Winter Solace❄️
❄️Why Not Us❄️
❄️The Elf Witch❄️
❄️Dream In The Ashes❄️
❄️Keepers of Pokémon❄️
❄️The LoveYou Gave Me❄️
❄️The Pentagon Paradox❄️
❄️"Divine Reckoning: Mahabharata's Resurgence in Kaliyuga"❄️
❄️I'm right here❄️
❄️DARKNESS TOGETHER❄️
❄️ɢʀᴇᴇɴᴠɪʟʟᴇ ʜɪɢʜ ꜱᴄʜᴏᴏʟ ꜱᴇʀɪᴇꜱ: 𝙼𝚄𝚁𝙳𝙴𝚁 𝙸𝚂 𝚃𝙷𝙴 𝙲𝙰𝚂𝙴❄️
❄️UNLOCK YOU❄️
❄️Fool's Pledge❄️
❄️So Far Away❄️
❄️Break Me & Remake Me❄️
❄️PARADISE | Caught In The Fire❄️
❄️The Twelve Stars❄️
❄️Sincere's Game - The Name Game❄️
❄️Amongst the Waking Dreams❄️
❄️Mysteries Of Riverwood❄️
❄️THE Destiny Brought Them Together❄️
❄️The Deer and The Wolf❄️
❄️Penny - Guardian❄️
❄️A Christmas Without Spirit❄️
❄️A Bead In The Lost Woods❄️
❄️The 6 devils ...will they last❄️
❄️Guarding Hearts' Whimsy❄️
❄️The Bullied Girl❄️
❄️THE MAN BEHIND MY MIND❄️
❄️The God's Game❄️
❄️Refrain❄️
❄️Peerless❄️
❄️Shattered Souls❄️
❄️The Moon Is New.❄️
❄️Life Within The Halls❄️
❄️VEILED ROSE❄️
❄️𝐄𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐥 𝐃𝐚𝐦𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧❄️
❄️Foreign Objects❄️
❄️Dear Mocha❄️
❄️Hello Butterflies❄️
❄️𝐖𝐇𝐎 𝐈𝐒 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐈𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑?❄️
❄️𝐍𝐎𝐓𝐇𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐓𝐎 𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄❄️
❄️Default Title - I Accept The ❤❤ Conditions Of Love ❤❤❄️
❄️The Chronicles: Mark's Adventures❄️
❄️Threads✔️❄️
❄️The Tales of Evergreen: On Weed-Overgrown Bed❄️
❄️Family - UNITED STRENGTH❄️
❄️The storyThreads Of Fate❄️
❄️HIRAETH❄️
❄️Heir of Shadows and Destruction❄️
❄️His Devilish Queen❄️
❄️Dragoniers❄️
❄️Finding Death❄️
❄️Tears Of Love❄️
❄️JOURNEY OF LOVE❄️
❄️Public Relations❄️
❄️It's A Dangerous Life❄️
❄️I do believe in your galaxy//KTH FF❄️
❄️Heroine❄️
❄️Trust Me❄️
❄️Behind the spotlight {T.K}❄️
❄️Beyond the grave {T.K}❄️
❄️Unnoticed (an original Musical)❄️
❄️THE SURGEON'S SOLITUDE❄️
❄️You're alright, Larusso❄️
❄️Station❄️
❄️The Kingdom❄️
❄️Stay Mine❄️
❄️Oregon Trail: A mystery in plain sight❄️
❄️NOOR❄️
❄️Lost In The Fray❄️
❄️Written in the Stars || TWD❄️
❄️My Guardian Angel❄️
❄️The First Draft❄️
❄️Made It Big❄️
❄️poetic thoughts❄️
❄️The Untouchable ❄️
❄️Beyond The Gaze: A Love Unseen❄️
❄️Black rose❄️
❄️Burning Aflame | The Blood of Olympus❄️
❄️Grim | Harry Potter❄️
❄️The Best Mistakes❄️
❄️Shadewalker || ONC 2024❄️
❄️Maskli (Legacy Of Bluebloods 1#)❄️
❄️That's The Spirit❄️
❄️Damn Your Lies | ONC 2024✔❄️
❄️Twisted Games❄️
❄️The Way of Shadow❄️
❄️He is beautiful❄️
❄️Back With A Vengeance ❄️
❄️Black Fire | The Rejected Mate❄️
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De StoryTellerAD

Creativity:15 /15

The way that the author did this story and the creativity that this author has is without a doubt phenomenal, like the beginning of the story just dragged you in. like this author does not play when it comes to creativity and how far their mind can go with it.


Originality: 15/15

The way this story starts off and the way that the author does this story are not what I was expecting. So, what I've not read in this story had me guessing from the time I opened that book to the time I was done with the 3rd chapter. The way that the author does it is so out of the box..


Storytelling:15 /15

All I have to say to this is it's phenomenal. There is no other word to describe this; it's phenomenal. The way that the author does the story and the way that they bring you into their world is not really storytelling because they do it in such a unique way that I don't even consider it storytelling because you don't feel like you're really reading a story. You feel like you're just in the book.

Character: 15/15

I think the characters are hilarious, and I'm not even gonna lie about that. The way that they did the characters they are so real. They have such a personality, and that's what I love about it. They're realistic, and the way that they feel like they're more realistic characters than they are in a book-type character is what makes you really want to come back to the story. Because when you start reading it, you get lost in it, and you forget that you're actually reading a book.


Story Flows:15 /15

I didn't see anything around this story. I did not see any errors. I did not see any flaws. I didn't see any Sentence or structure errors. Since anything sounded out of place, I didn't see anything that didn't belong. Everything was perfect.


Cover Design:15 /15

The cover is beyond beautiful. Fits the story lovely, but. It is so gorgeous. It is. It's such a beautiful cover.

Final Thoughts: 10/10

At the end of the day, I find that this author is very talented. It's very hard to find authors that have talent, but this author has such beautiful talent and the way that they bring you into their world that it doesn't seem like you're reading a book. It seems like you are watching that crime. Unfold and watch the story come together for me. It is a story that I would definitely be putting into my story list to go back to in the future. But once again, it's a story that doesn't have a lot of votes. The story only has 39 votes. In my mind, it is like, why does it only have 39 votes? For me, stories like this need to have at least 100 200,000 a million, etc. Types of votes. Because of the way it is because of how talented this author is. But once again, this author is knocking on the recognition that they deserve, and it frustrates me. Because stories like days are the stories that should be at the top of the line, and yet it is not because of that. It is under a rock, waiting to be noticed. And I'm sorry, but this story needs to be noticed. It's lovely. The author has talent, and talent is hard to find. You can have a very good story, but it takes a lot to have talent.

Chapters I read3:

Total points:100

Summary of the book:

On an early Monday morning in Germany, Sankt Goarhausen's police department finds itself in a peculiar position as several policemen visit the site at the Rhine. Among them, 25-year old Henning Dorn is tasked to investigate the case of the salvage team's strange discovery: an unscathed coffin containing two bodies. As he opens the coffin to take a look, Dorn is severely surprised at its contents, setting him onto the path to uncover Sankt Goarshausen's mysteries.Was it murder? Suicide? Or is the truth hidden beneath the Rhine's waters?| Status: Ongoing | Language: English (few German words) | Genre: Mystery | Each Chapter length : ~ 1500 - ~ 2500 words | Chapter Release: Weekly (Tuesdays & Fridays)

AUTHORS WARNING

Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they can not be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.

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