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Are you looking for a place where somebody will review your story honestly? Where they talk and let you know... Daha Fazla

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📚Reading List 📚
❄️The Last Philosopher❄️
❄️The Right To Die❄️
❄️Rich Re:grets❄️
❄️The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth❄️
❄️Rebellion - Prince Of Dawn❄️
❄️Subterra Heart❄️
❄️The Diary Of A Model (The Contract)❄️
❄️To Steal A Weeping Window❄️
❄️The Adventures Of Rel Rel Lost Mirror 2nd Edition❄️
❄️The Edge Of Truth❄️
❄️Machine Heart: A Story Of Mystery And Intrigue❄️
❄️Close Enemies❄️
❄️Dear Myrtle Cove❄️
❄️Reflections Of Choice❄️
❄️Saving Michael❄️
❄️EVAUGHN❄️
❄️False Hate❄️
❄️Outbreak: The First Surge❄️
❄️The Burden of a Secret❄️
❄️Destined Strangers❄️
❄️DELONIX❄️
❄️Tale of the Princess❄️
❄️❀ 𝐍𝐨𝐯𝐚𝐥𝐮𝐧𝐨𝐬𝐢𝐬 ❀ | 18+❄️
❄️Empire: playing dice❄️
❄️The Mind Of A Tipsy Teenager❄️
❄️Return of the Youngest Auclair❄️
❄️US v THEM❄️
❄️The Great Pretende❄️
❄️The Prince and the Punk❄️
❄️Claire: The Diary of A Model 2[The Journey]❄️
❄️Unseen Fragments❄️
❄️Empress Of Self - Ruin❄️
❄️IYO❄️
❄️Tangled Claws❄️
❄️Their Little Princess❄️
❄️Hunted: Destructive Outbreak❄️
❄️Bitter Sweet Affair❄️
❄️Feverish Revenge❄️
❄️FOG OF THE HEART❄️
❄️House Of Zale❄️
❄️Poor in heaven/The lake club❄️
❄️Lie To Me❄️
❄️The Healing Bond❄️
❄️Curse Of Noble Blood❄️
❄️The Prep Diary: How The Prep Became So Preppy❄️
❄️what do we count in a galaxy filled with unlucky Stars?❄️
❄️Of moons and blood❄️
❄️Bloody Royals /18+❄️
❄️Someday, Somewhere, Somehow❄️
❄️Ambrosia Promise❄️
❄️The Lost Chronicles of a Villainess❄️
❄️In The Thorns Of A Castle❄️
❄️The Dream Of Dead❄️
❄️Wrong Planet/ X Together❄️
❄️Rich Man's Ransom // Huening Kai FF✔️❄️
❄️Fated To Be You❄️
❄️Jake Rose The Werewolf❄️
❄️Shadows Of Deceit❄️
❄️The Gap❄️
❄️A Kingdom Of Dreams❄️
❄️Crown Of Spells❄️
❄️Mayapuri- City Of Dreams...❄️
❄️Dungeon❄️
❄️Falling For Jackson Again!❄️
❄️Luna Bloodlust✔️❄️
❄️Best Night Ever❄️
❄️A Touch of Fate❄️
❄️Who Killed Vivrr? ||Tomorrow X Tomorrow❄️
❄️The Lethal Heptagon❄️
❄️How To Survive Murder❄️
❄️The Stalker*Book One*❄️
❄️Love At Dawn❄️
❄️This Is The Fall❄️
❄️Heart Waves❄️
❄️So What If You Love Me?❄️
❄️ViperSong❄️
❄️Guardians Of Heavnsworth❄️
❄️New World Magic❄️
❄️A Kingdom Of Dreams❄️
❄️Not My Little Sister❄️
❄️Stay❄️
❄️Aetheria Falling❄️
❄️1000 Years Of Light❄️
❄️Through Thick And Thin❄️
❄️Auctioned To The Ruthless Billionaire❄️
❄️Finding Love Again❄️
❄️The Beast's Untamed Desire❄️
❄️Solace❄️
❄️In The Night Sky❄️
❄️The Slient Chase❄️
❄️Just Three Days❄️
❄️This Is The way It Goes, I Guess❄️
❄️River Haven Hotel❄️
❄️The Princess And The Fox❄️
❄️Admiring The Light❄️
❄️SHS❄️
❄️The Dragon Emperor❄️
❄️Slate Gray❄️
❄️Their Angel❄️
❄️Veiled Desires❄️
❄️Kendra❄️
❄️Going After The Wrong Guy❄️
❄️Amethyst❄️
❄️Winter Solace❄️
❄️Why Not Us❄️
❄️The Elf Witch❄️
❄️Dream In The Ashes❄️
❄️Keepers of Pokémon❄️
❄️The LoveYou Gave Me❄️
❄️The Pentagon Paradox❄️
❄️"Divine Reckoning: Mahabharata's Resurgence in Kaliyuga"❄️
❄️I'm right here❄️
❄️DARKNESS TOGETHER❄️
❄️ɢʀᴇᴇɴᴠɪʟʟᴇ ʜɪɢʜ ꜱᴄʜᴏᴏʟ ꜱᴇʀɪᴇꜱ: 𝙼𝚄𝚁𝙳𝙴𝚁 𝙸𝚂 𝚃𝙷𝙴 𝙲𝙰𝚂𝙴❄️
❄️UNLOCK YOU❄️
❄️Fool's Pledge❄️
❄️So Far Away❄️
❄️Break Me & Remake Me❄️
❄️PARADISE | Caught In The Fire❄️
❄️Lost in Blue❄️
❄️The Twelve Stars❄️
❄️Sincere's Game - The Name Game❄️
❄️Amongst the Waking Dreams❄️
❄️Mysteries Of Riverwood❄️
❄️THE Destiny Brought Them Together❄️
❄️The Deer and The Wolf❄️
❄️Penny - Guardian❄️
❄️A Christmas Without Spirit❄️
❄️A Bead In The Lost Woods❄️
❄️The 6 devils ...will they last❄️
❄️Guarding Hearts' Whimsy❄️
❄️The Bullied Girl❄️
❄️THE MAN BEHIND MY MIND❄️
❄️The God's Game❄️
❄️Refrain❄️
❄️Peerless❄️
❄️Shattered Souls❄️
❄️The Moon Is New.❄️
❄️Life Within The Halls❄️
❄️VEILED ROSE❄️
❄️𝐄𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐥 𝐃𝐚𝐦𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧❄️
❄️Foreign Objects❄️
❄️Dear Mocha❄️
❄️Hello Butterflies❄️
❄️𝐖𝐇𝐎 𝐈𝐒 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐈𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑?❄️
❄️𝐍𝐎𝐓𝐇𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐓𝐎 𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄❄️
❄️Default Title - I Accept The ❤❤ Conditions Of Love ❤❤❄️
❄️The Chronicles: Mark's Adventures❄️
❄️Threads✔️❄️
❄️The Tales of Evergreen: On Weed-Overgrown Bed❄️
❄️Family - UNITED STRENGTH❄️
❄️The storyThreads Of Fate❄️
❄️HIRAETH❄️
❄️Heir of Shadows and Destruction❄️
❄️His Devilish Queen❄️
❄️Dragoniers❄️
❄️Finding Death❄️
❄️Tears Of Love❄️
❄️JOURNEY OF LOVE❄️
❄️Public Relations❄️
❄️It's A Dangerous Life❄️
❄️I do believe in your galaxy//KTH FF❄️
❄️Heroine❄️
❄️Trust Me❄️
❄️Behind the spotlight {T.K}❄️
❄️Beyond the grave {T.K}❄️
❄️Unnoticed (an original Musical)❄️
❄️THE SURGEON'S SOLITUDE❄️
❄️You're alright, Larusso❄️
❄️Station❄️
❄️The Kingdom❄️
❄️Stay Mine❄️
❄️Oregon Trail: A mystery in plain sight❄️
❄️NOOR❄️
❄️Lost In The Fray❄️
❄️Written in the Stars || TWD❄️
❄️My Guardian Angel❄️
❄️The First Draft❄️
❄️Made It Big❄️
❄️poetic thoughts❄️
❄️The Untouchable ❄️
❄️Beyond The Gaze: A Love Unseen❄️

❄️Luminaries❄️

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Creativity:15 /15

At the end of the day, I think the way that the author writes this story is phenomenal. When it comes to the story is so out of the park ridiculously awesome that you're not sure if you're actually reading a book or watching a movie. Honestly say that because at the end of the day, I was literally listening to the book read to me, and I forgot it was actually reading a book. I thought I was watching a movie until my tablet yelled at me that I needed to charge it. That creativity of the story will blow your mind like 100% will blow your mind when you start reading this story. Will just be like, wait, what the heck.


Originality: 15/15

The originality: I just can't read this author the way this story is formulated. I feel like the author took a good couple of years to figure out this story because you can literally watch this story in your head. It is so detailed and so descriptive that it is just stunning. I don't understand why they're not getting the perfect reads in stories like this and others I've read. Why aren't people reading stories? Like, I don't know how to critique a story that's pretty much perfect, and that's what this story is. The way that the author has created such a fantastic story, I have no words. You go and look at all the reviews I've done. It takes a lot for me to be speechless. And I am 100% speechless with this story and how well-written and thought out it is.

Storytelling: 15/15

I would love to read more of this author's work. The storytelling is perfect, but I don't know how to critique a story like this. Because of the way that the author has written it, there's nothing wrong with it. Everything is so out of the park and beautiful. The details, the events, and the characters like it will blow your mind. There are a lot of stories out there that have blown my mind, but oh my god, this author has so much talent.

Character:15 /15

They once again, I don't know what to say. Please list the characters nothing wrong with them; I can connect with all the characters. the characters are beautifully written, well thought out detailed everything like I don't even know why this author asked for a review. At the end of the day, their story is perfect. and I don't say that a lot, and I don't mean to be rude. I hope it doesn't come off as rude. But I see nothing wrong with their story.

Story Flows: 15/15

I didn't see anything wrong with it when it came to the grammar. Everything flowed very nicely. All the sentences, the structure, and everything else were perfect. I didn't see anything wrong; I didn't see anything out of place. Everything flowed very nicely.

Cover Design: 15/15

The cover is beautiful. It fits the story. There's nothing wrong with the cover. The cover and the story complement each other very well.

Final Thoughts: 10/10

At the end of the day, I don't think the author really needs any reviews if I'm going, to be honest; the win that the author writes the story and the win that the story is going to is perfect. I don't see anything wrong with the story from a reader's point of view. It really keeps you intrigued. It wants you to go back to the story; it makes you contemplate what's going on in the story. It really makes you guess everything that's going on in the story. It's like a movie that just never stops; when it does stop, you want to know if there's more of the movie. The story was very intriguing. It brought me in from the very first chapter and was ongoing like it never stopped, making me want to read it. In fact, there were times when I wasn't sure if I was reading a story or watching a movie because of the story's way. It's almost like you are watching a movie inside your head but reading the story simultaneously, which is beautiful. there were times I had to stop doing what I was doing because I honestly thought I was watching a movie, and I didn't want to be like oh my goodness, I'm going to miss something in the movie. The story's phenomenal, like the story, is 100 percent phenomenal, and it takes a lot for me to be speechless, but with this story, I am 100 percent speechless. I do not know how to critique such a great story. It is perfection

Chapters I read: 3 

Total points:  100

Summary of the book: 

In which a group of vigilantes take up the mantle as a divided city's protectors.Because who better to entrust with the safety of an entire populace of people than a couple of sleep deprived, magically empowered teenagers?-or-A group of teenage vigilantes attempt to restore the public's faith in their magically endowed race, fending off villains as they rise to power and bring fear to the streets of Discon. However, all of their efforts and progress fall into jeopardy in tandem with the safety of the rest of the city with the rise of an extremist group led by a mysterious and all-powerful leader.

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Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they can not be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.

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