TANHAYEE (Book1- Birla Broth...

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This story is of a boy Who is devoid of emotions .. He has nothing in his life apart from hollowness... he d... Mehr

Introducing the characters
Information regarding the book
Prologue
Introducing Another set of Characters
1. Two Different Worlds
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2. Clash of Two Tornado
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3. Soulful voice
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4. Meeting with Elder Brothers
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5. Stolen Moment
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6. Score settled
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7. Shocked
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8. Destiny's game
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9. Unexpected Truth
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10. Taking Responsibility
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11. New reality
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12. Testing Time
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13. Family Equation
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14. First Step towards Understanding
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15. Hidden love and Pain
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17. Blending
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18. Acceptance
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19. Protective Brothers
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20. Realisation
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21. Forging a New Beginning
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22. Birla Family Dynamics
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23. Manipulation
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24. Hurt Brothers
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25. Ultimate Reality Check

16. Taking A Chance

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Birla Mansion

As neevan rushed out from there to his room... leaving all the brothers shocked ....

Nishant eyes had tears - meine usway me ni bola tha bhai... ki nani buri h... mai to bas

nirbhay pulled him closer to his heart - i know baccha sshh

nishant teary - to usne esa kyu bola ki sirf uski nani h ... vo to meri bhi nani thi na .....

Nirbhay knew nishant is quite sensetive he could relate with neevan too but nishant is too young to understand what neevan is going through and why he said that ..

nirbhay - Nishu.. i know baccha tera kia intention tha but neevan .vo to chota h na baccha use galatfehmi hogyi

nishant hurt - but ese kese puri baat sune bina vo itna kuch suna sakta h .. vo to ese bol ra h jese hum janbuch k nani se ni mila but sach to ye h ki nani he kbhi humse

nirbhay - sach kia h vo humme se kisiko nhi pata.... jo humare liye sach h shayed vo neevan k liye sach na ho ...

divyaa - Par hum usk is tarah assumption k basis pr sabko judge karne ni de sakte na nirbhay.   is tarah to sirf rishte bigar re h...

nirav tens - par bhabhi hum use force bhi kese

divya - u know what nirav ... tum dono bhai neevan ko leke kuch zyada sensetive ho re ho ....  vo jitna tumlogo se dur bhagna chah ra h tumlog bhagne de re ho.... ese to bas vo sabse dur hota chala jaega jo rishta nani tum charo bhaio me dekhna chahty thi vo ni hopayega

nishant just weep his tears and left to his room

nirav - nish.. nish baat to sun baccha

but nishant left...

divya - use rok k kia hoga nirav.... its time hum neevan ko roke

nirbhay upset - zabardasti ni karna chahta me usk sath divya...

divya - me manty hu nirbhay har jagah zabardasti karna jaes ni h lekin kabhi kabhi kuch jagao me apna point rkhna bht zarury hota h....  abhi jo kuch bhi hora h usse sirf nishant hurt ni huya h neevan bhi hua h ... balki hun sab huye h or ye sab chize tabhi thik hongi jab u will start communicating...  jese neevan ko uski galtyo pe tokte ho usi tarah usk in assumptions ko bhi rokna hoga.... 

saying she walked out.... while nirbhay and nirav look at each other she was right they could not let it go on for forever this has to stop ..!

Otherhand in Neevan's room

Neevan was furiously weeping his tears hoe could they say something like this about his nani ...she was his nani ... and no one has the right to say anything to her. ....

Divya entered in his room and saw him crying though her heart went out to the boy but it is too much important for him to realise what he was doing is wrong ...

Neevan lookinh away - leave me alone ...

divya angrily - no i will not...

neevan shocked her tone was firm

divya angrily - ye sab kia tha neevan?? is this the way you should talk with your brother?

neevan hurt - Apko bhi meri he galty nazar aa ri h? unhone jo kaha vo apko nazar ni aya ...  vo meri nani k bare me

divya cuts him - vo unlogo ki bhi nani hai neevan...! its not only you who is connected with her .  they are too involved

Neevan angrily - no they are not ..! vo sirf meri nani thi....  jinlogo ki sifarish leke ap ayi h vo log to kabhi aye bhi ni meri nani k pass!!!

Divya angrily - tunhe sab pta h?? kitne bare khudko smjte ho tum?? did nani told u that

neevan look away - har chiz batane ki zarurat ni hoty.... kuch chize ese bhi samaj aty hai..... 

Divya - agar yahi baat h to kyu nani ne apne akhri wakt pe nirbhay ko bulaya ..

neevan's gasped

divya angrily - Agar tumhare bhai sachme itne bure hote to kyu bulaya unhone .... tum to apne bhai k sath rehna bhi ni chahte fir bhi tumhare khilaf jake nirbhay ko bulaya.... kabhi socha ni tumne kyu??

Neevan stood up agitated - Agar apko unki tarafdari karni h to please chale jaiye yaha se ..  actually i should have known ...  ap mujhe kyu smjhogi....  after all ho to ap mr birla ki patni... mai he pagal tha jo anjane me apko apna samaj betha tha its all my fault.... i should have known you can always be Mrs Birla to me not my bhabh....

Divya harshly turnrd him and SLAPPED him right across his face

Neevan shocked

Divya angrily - ye rishte h neevan koi mazak nhi chal ra h yaha pe ki jab chahe apna lia or jab chahe tork phek dia ..! tumhare liye me kia feel karty hu vo mere actions jawab denge i dont need to proove you anything.... shayed tumhare life me rishto ka yahi matlab hota h haa me haa milana but i m sorry i do not look upto relationship like that.... kal Tak me tumhare sath thi to tumne bhabhi bna lia or aj jab me tumhe tumhari galty samjhane ayi hu....  to me Mrs Birla ban gyi ?? is that how a relationship work for you...!


neevan agitated - meri koi glty nhi h.... 

divya angrily - galty hai!!

neevan flinched

divya - Aj jo tumne kia vo bht galat kia h neevan!!! How could u hurt your brothers like this? tumhe pta bhi tha vo log kis baat kar re tha

neevan - vo log Nani k bare me!

divya cuts - adhuri sachai .... jhut se bhi zyada khatarnak hoty h ... neevan ... ! and tum adhuri sacchai k basis pe ji re ho....

neevan shock

divya - tumne ye to sunlia ki nishant ne kia bola par ye ni sunpaya ki vo esa kyu bol ra tha ...!! kyuki vo regret kar ra tha ... use bura lag ra tha ki uska ek chota bhai hone k bawajud vo usk sath time spend ni kar paya jaan ni paya ...  use.   nani agar himmat kark sach batadety to shayed kisiko aj itna suffer ni karna hota

Neevan shocked - unhe nhi pata tha ?? 

divya angrily - unhe kese pata hoga neevan jab kisine unse kuch kaha he ni..

neevan shocked and step back - no... noo this cannot be possible .... unhe pta tha... unhe pta tha mere bare me ... unhone bola tha unhe pta tha

divya confused - kisne bola tha neevan?... nani ne???

Neevan closed his eyes - Mrs Chauhaan....

Divya shocked - whattt???

neevan with tears - Unhone bola tha mujhe ki unhe sab pata tha.. he just dont want to accept me ...  because Mr.Nitin birla doesnt think of me as his son ..

Divya shocked and froze how come this is possible ... nirbhay dont even know about him.... 

Neevan cried - meine kabhi unk acceptance ki bhik nhi mangi.... mujhe problem h to bas unk dhakosle se unk jhut se..  agar vo mujhe apna mante he ni to us sach k sath rahe na kyu... kyu ye jhute dawe karte h!! kyu pyaar jatane ka natak krtw h!!

Divya made him turn -. did Mrs chauhaan told you that Nirbhay knew about you

neevan cried and nodded divya shocked that means the seeds of misunderstanding have been planted from there .... 

neevan cried his heart out while divya just hug him

neevan - please mujhe mere haal pe chordijiye please... !! me thik hu mujhe kisika sath nhi chahiye kisika sahara nhi chahiye bas chordijiye mujhe

Divya weeping his tears - Neevan ..  meri ek baat manega . 

Neevan look at her

Divya - Ekbar Nirbhay se baat karle

neevan look away

divya - Kyuki tum jo soch re ho jo samaj re ho vo sahi nhi h neevan ...  nirbhay ko me jbse jnty hu... unhe tumhare bare me pta he ni thax

neevan look away - jhut!!  apko nhi pata h jhute h vo

divya - or saccha kon h tumhari maa??

neevan gasped

divya - tum Mrs chauhan  k baato pe yakin kar sakte ho?? lekin vo bhai jinko tun thik se jante bhi nhi .. unk pass ni jaa sakte unhe ek mauka ni de sakte??

Neevan quiet.. divya weeping her teaes

divya - takliff agar tumhe ho ri h to tumhare baki tino bhai ko bhi hoty h .. tum chote bhai ho unk they want to pamper you love you ... but na to tum unk karib ate ho na unhe ane dete ho.... tumhe lgta h tum khudko protect kar re ho hurt hone se but sach ye h ki tum isse khud or hurt ho re ho ... usi chkkr me dusro ko bhi kar re ho jis tarah aj tumne nishant ko kia...

neevan look at her shocked

divya - Nishant was always a pampered child me jnty hu vo kbhi kisik sath kuch share ni krta lekin usne tumhare sath share kia... us din vo prawn curry tumhe offer kar ra tha jo uska fav h vo kisiko ni deta ...  just because he wanted you to enjoy your food.  ...  tum ek kadam barhaoge na ... to das kadam tumhare bhai tumhare liyr barhayenge.... ek ese lady ki baato me ake tum apne ane wale kal ko kharab mat karo.....  this is all i could say...

saying she walked out while neevan shocked......  did they really not know  about them?? was this all a lie???

At night...

Nishant was lieng in his bed sadly gazing at the moon the way Neevan talked with him it really hurted him... he literally accused him for saying bad things about nani... but that was not his intention.... a lone tear fell from his eyes

That is when a soft gentle touch caress his head nishant immidiately weep his tears and sat up...

Nirbhay sat beside him - Abhi tak usi baat ko leke betha h?

Nishant shook his head.   - i m fine bhai ...

Nirbhay - dikh ra h vo shakal pe...

Nishant - bhai... me nani ko bura ni bol ra tha .. me bas ... (his voice choked) use kyu laga esa ki me apne he nani k bare me bura bolunga me bas upset tha.. i.

Nirbhay - Me tujhr janta hu samajta hu vo nhi na baccha...m. we cannot expect anything from him right now.... 

nirav - par bhai vo bhi to humara bhai h hum kab tak usko ese dur jane denge

nirbhay closed his eyes - i dont want to force our relationship on him.....  mujhe pehle pta karna hoga why does he think like that.... why did he said something like that??

That is when they all heard a soft note.....

Neevan was gazing at a picture of his nani .... he remember the way she hugged him.. the way she always told him... to meet with his brothers but he never did..... 

What today his bhabhi told him made him more puzzled....  he wished for once his nani was there....   

******* Flashback *****

Nani agitated - Tujhe kia hogya h neevan tu kyu mujhe nirbhay se baat karne ni de ra h

neevan with tears - mujhe nhi karni unse koi baat nani ap kyu ni smjty why are u forcing me

Nani - Mujhe samajme ni ara...  tujhr Anamika ne esa kia bol dia ki ... tu kisi ki baat ni sunna chahta.... me nirbhay se baat krk rahungi

neevan cried - bas kijiye nani please....  jo sachai me accept kar chuka hu ap kyu unhe mujhe sunana chahty h?? Ap kyu chahty h ki me khud apne kano se ye baat sunu ki vo nhi chahte mujhe!!!

Nani gasped

neevan - Mrs chauhan ko kia he mil jaega jhut bolke.   vo bhale he jese bhi ho.... unki ye baat sach h ki that he dont want me in there life....  Or me bhi is sach ko accept karchuka hu

nani shocked - Anamika ne keh dia or tune manlia?? ekbar puchega bhi nhi usse

neevan - puchne k liye haq ki zarurat hoty h or mere pass vo haq he nhi h....

Nani shocked..neevan being in his extreme stubbornness to protect himself from the hurt

neevan - Agar apne unhe phone karne ki koshish bhi ki na....   to me... chala jaunga.... yha se... is sheher se...

nani shocked - neevan!!

neevan with teaes - me sachi chala jaunga nani or me wapas lautk bhi ni aunga...

nani just hug him to calm him - kesi baate kar ra h beta!...

neevan with tears - to ap wada karo ap unse baat ni karoge phone ni karoge unhe! jinlogo ko humse wasta nhi j...humara bhi unse koi wasta ni hona chahiye please

That time a. fourteen year old boy just wanted to protect himself from the hurt he will be facing when he will hear that his brother dont want him ... he chose to shut the doors completely which can hurt him

***** Flashback ends *****

Neevan closed his eyes in tears now Divya's words had made him confused was he wrong not letting his nani speak? did he get played by his mother??  but what will she get by doing this??

How badly he was missing his nani he just want her warmth again. ..   he wish she could come back

Neevan didnt realise when his fingers started  playing the tune of guitar ..

Neevan sang :-

Chaand Suraj Bhi Waheen Hain, Hai Waheen Aasmaan...

Zindagi Bhi Chal Rahi Hai, Chal Raha Hai Jahaan..

Nirbhay nirav stood near his room door...while neevan was lost in his world with Eyes closed he was singing

Main Hi Thehra Hun
Khud Mein Simta Hun
Dil Hai Gham Se Bhara
Bin Tere
Kaise Jeeun Mein
Kuch To De Mashwara....

nirbhay eyes had tears he could feel the pain of his heart from that voice ....  Nishant couldnt stop himself and he also came because that was a beautiful voice filled with pain





neevan continued

Zindagaani Aisi Reh Guzar
Pe Mujhko Laayi
Saaye Se Bhi Ab Tere
Ho Gayi Judaayi
Tanha Dil
Roya Re, Dil Roya Re
Roya Re, Dil Roya Re
Roya Re, Dil Roya Re
Roya Re, Dil Roya Re..

Neevan stopped his eyes had tears ..while nirbhay just wanted to go to him and engulf him in his embrace but the boy will not give him that place..... 

Divya hold nirbhay's hand and drag him with her

nirbhay tensed. - Divya... divya? what are u doing?? waha neevan akela h...  tum mujhe yaha kyu

Divya - neevan akela h to... bhi kia tum usk pass jaa re ho? nhi na ... u both are just pushing each other .. ek apni galatfehmi mai ... or dusra usko apne space me rehne dene k liye

Nirbhay palmed his faxe he just dont understand how to tell neevan to give him a chance he is this close to begging

Divya - kia tumhe neevan k bare me pta tha pehle se?

nirbhay shocked - Whattt

Divya sighs she was right she can see exact unawareness in his eyes ..neevan is definitely wrong somewhere ...

Divya - Neevan ko lgta hai ki tumhe usk bare me pata tha and u didnot accepted him u didnt want to accept him

Nirbhay shocked that was a big blow how on earth neevan can think like this who told him that....

Divya told him everything and nirbhay's eyes went dark in anger.. did his mother just play that dirty game to put herself out of the shit...? it was only because of her they all are in this position and how could she put the entire blame on him...

Nirbhau furious he took his car keys he needed answers he needed to ask Mrs chauhan

divya tens n stop him - Kaha jaa re ho tum...

Nirbhay - She needs to give me answers Divya... hato yha se

divya - nhi nirbhay... is wakt neevan ko tumhari zarurat h.. Mrs chauhan ko confront hum baad me bhi kar sakte hai....

nirbhay angrily - that lady had played very dirty divya she needs to give me answers

Divya - she is not in the city currently vo bahar h.. sheher se...

nirbhay look at her

divya - meine unk office me phone kia tha.... so dont waste your time there..... 

Nirbhay just sat on the nearby chair shockrd tensed ...

Divya hold his hand - sab thik hojaega nirbhay

nirbhay - he dont trust me divya... itne saalo ki nafrat me kese

Divya - nafrat nhi karta h vo nirbhay.... bas zindagi se naummid hoke betha hai... use hum ni sambhalenge to kon sambhalega.... 

Nirbhay eyes had tears je just went to neevan's room to talk to him but found him sleeping resting his head on the bed rest

Nirbhay went upto him his eyes had dried tears the boy had cried himself to sleep....Nirbhay just gently remove his guitar from his grip and gently lied him down....   he looked restless...

Nirbhay softly caress his head and kissed his forehead and neevan relaxes immidiately...

nirbhay sighs the day had been very exhausting for all of them... tomorrow can be the day of Talk....   

In midnight...

A loud scream woke everyone up...  Nirbhay rushed to Neevan's room to find him sleeping restless in his sleep nirav was trying to Calm him but he was just not ready to listen

Nirbhay rushed to them tensed - kia hua

Neevan murmuring - No... no pl.. please .. esa mat .. kaho pl..please.... vo... mujhse py .pyaar karte h... aa..aap jhut bol re ho .... mumma... app...  please... 

nirbhay and nirav shockdd

nirbhay immidiately went near neevan and tab his cheeks - neevan.. neevan ankhe kholo.... 

neevan tensed - M..ujhe.. mujhe please ... bhai.. k pass le chalo please... please...   

nirbhay eyes had tears he just pulled him closer to his chest - yahi hu me beta...yahi hu ankhe khol baccha... dekh tere bhai tere pass he hai ...m

nirbhay patted his cheeks bit harshly... neevan open his eyes .... 

nirbhay tensed - neevan...  u okay baccha??

Neevan could not see him properly his eyes blurred he was feeling weak he closed his eyes again...

Nirbhay shocked - neevan...!

nirbhay patted his cheeks ... it seems like neevan had went unconsious....  

Nirav was immidiately in form he gave neevan an injection...

Nirbhay tensed - kia hua use?

Nirav - highly stressed out hai... kisi baat ko leke...  that caused the panick attack. 

nirbhay shock - panick attack?

nirav tens - koi bura sapna dekha hoga usne.. jis wjh se panick attack aya h....

Nirbhay shocked he just pulled neevan closer to his heart how much this boy will suffer in this young age....v

Nirbhay with tears - mai yahi hu baccha... humesha tere sath rahunga... bas dont scare your brother like this beta.... 

Nirbhay kissed his forehead and just stayed there with him he dont want to leave him even for a second..








Next day morning....

Nishant was there in neevans room .. neevan was still sleeping due to the effect of medicine ... while nirbhay sat there holding his hand....

nishant tensed - ye itna kese bimar par jata h bhai....ye na thik ss kuch khata bhi nhi h shayrd isliye...

Nirbhay smile he was hurt last night but still seeing neevan's condition he  forgit everything and rush to his aid

Nishant - bhai isk sath na apko bht strict hona parega ... ap kuch bolte ni ho na tabhi ye itna apne marzi chalata h...

Nirbhay smile he could only see love shining in his eyes from him... nishant is like this only he loves with all his heart and neevan had taken a big place in his heart...  

Nishant - ye kab uthega bhai? ye pkka thik h na?? bhaiyu bhi to subah subah chle gye

Nirbhay sighs - Agar thik ni hota to tere bhaiyu jate kia??  uth jaega vo abhi... chinta mat kar ..





nirbhay left to make some soup from him the boy really needed some nourishment....

Nishant cutely - Chinta ni kar ra tha me bas ese he..... (but he trailed off)

Nishant sighs he looked at him and then  went towards window.... side as cold breeze was coming... the moment nishant turned neevan woke up... he was awake and heard every talk of nishant.... and he also felt concern in the voice of nishant...

Neevan look at nishant saw him staring outsides the window he realised  that last night he was being too harsh to nishant he shouldn't have been...

Nishant turned back to see neevan woken up.... and was trying to get up...

Nishant rush to him tens - kia kar re ho lete raho na ...

Neevan look at him and softly - i.. i need to sit... i m fine






Nishant sighs there is no use of talking... he gently helped him to sit ... and handed him a glass of water...

Neevan look at him he knew nishant was hurt or else he would have told him thousand of things by now ...  

Nishant - pi lo... bhabhi nhi h... warna vo he aty.. pta h tum unk ilawa to kisise madat ni lete... adjust karlo thora time..

Neevan just took the glass without any arguemnt....  that is when nirbhay entered and felt releifrd to see the boy woken up...

Nirbhay rush to him and sat there... neevan startled..

Nirbhay just hug him.. he dont carr the boy love him or not but he needed to assure himself that the boy was fine....

Nirbhay cub his face - thik h baccha??

Nirbhay was so carried away in his emotions that he didnt realise that he was calling him baccha...

Neevan look at him with tear filled eyes and he could actually see love shining in that eyes for him ... can it be fake??

Nirbhay tensed - thik h na baccha..? weakness to nhi h na?

neevan just nodded his head...  that is when nirbhay realised that what he was doing... 

Nishant - Ap ruko isk sath .. me chalta hu ...

Nishant just left from there neevan look at him with long lost eyes he thought he will blast at him just like other days but nishant didnt said anything like that...

Nirbhay saw the way he was gazing at the retreating figure of nishant did they build there relationship so much... that silenc has started effecting him?

Nirbhay - He will come along ... zyada der kisipe gussa ni rehpata

neevan startled he didnt ask that

Nirbhay - Fresh hojao me soup ready h

neevan cringed at the name of soup nirbhay smiled he looked so cute but the boy will not tell that he dont like it...

neevan  came out of the bed and he felt dizzy a bit... nirbhay was there in the blink of an eye... neevan saw how protectively nirbhay hold him... first time he did not protested....

nirbhay helped him towards the washroom...  he came out after freshening up to see  nirbhay waiting for him....

He sat on the bed nirbhay handed him his soup because he dont know whether he will like being fed by him or not...

neevan looked at the soup he felt like crying... he dont like soups at all... 

Neevan was lost in his battle of what to do with the soup...

nirbhay took the bowl and offered him a spoon neevan shocked

nirbhay - Soups kisiko bhi pasand ni hote neevan but right now u need this soup... medicines ki wjh se chakkar ayenge...  it will help you...

neevan - Apne ye bhi pata karlia??

Nirbhay smile - jab bataoge nhi to pata to karns parega na mere chote bhai ki pasand napasand...

Neevan stiff the word chote bhai warm his heart.. nirbhay saw the pain in his eyes...and sighs this couldnot go on forever...

nirbhay cub his face - Mujhe nhi pata tha Mrs chauhan told u something like this....  but mujhe tumhare bare me ni pta tha neevan

neevan shocked.   nirbhay could see the pain and shock in his eyes

nirbhay cub his face - i know.. i know u dont trust me...u dont have any reason to trust me.... but can u give me a chance? will u let me heal your broken heart?

Neevan look at him with tears he is scared ... scared of heartbreaks scared of getting betrayed....

Nirbhay - me tumpe koi rishta ni thopunga neevan... humara khun ka rishta h tum agar mujhe apna bhai na bhi mano..  me humesha tumhara bhai rahunga baccha....  our relationship needs a chance only... 

Neevan wanted to tell him on his face that he wont give that chance ... but his heart was screaming to lean on that shoulder and tell him how much he need him in his life...

after being so silent nirbhay realised may be neevan still needed more time..

nirbhay sighs - Divya mandir gayi h... vo ake pila degi soup.. till then you rest... 

Nirbhay was about to go....

neevan - I don't like Vegetable soup....

nirbhay startled

neevan making faces - chicken soup is fine by me ..  though i dont like that also but atleast i can gulp it...  but vegetabl soup is not something i can tolerate .. and when i m sick i dont like eating on my own... nani khilati thi mujhe...

it took nirbhay a second to realise what neevan was doing... he was actually giving him a chance....  by expressing his likes and dislikes....  trust dont come that easily atleast he is ready to take the first step...!

Nirbhay smiled and sat again.. and offered him the soup

neevan annoyed - i just told i...

nirbhay - chicken soup he h u should have tasted it before assuming as usual...





neevan shocked nirbhay offered him he open his mouth and it tasted good...   

neevan - Apne ye bhi pata karwaya?

nirbhay sighs - no one like vegetabl soup in this house neevan.. we are brothers... taste buds thore to similar honge na

Neevan sighs and ate the soup from his hand.... he was broken from the start but now someone is there to heal him...  and may be he is ready to take that one chance.... 

Nirbhay - do u trust me Neevan?

neevan - should i be honest..?

nirbhay - that is the base of the relation

Neevan - i dont know i trust u or not... mujhe jo bataya gya vo sach tha ya jo me feel kar ra hu vo sach hai... i cannot change overnight i have trust issues i m judgemental i know that...  but i think i m ready to take a chance.... agar nani ne ap pe bharosa kia tha to me us bharose pe bharosa karna chahta hu.... 

Nirbhay was more than happy that the boy was putting his trust on him.... 

Neevan - i m filled with flaws Mr Birla i mean bh ..

Nirbhay - save it

neevan startled

nirbhay - i know how difficult it is for you to take this step and trust me neevan jo bharosa tumne mujhpe dikhaya h na vohi bht h...  BHAI usdin bulana jisdin yaha se nikle (pointing at his heart) till then Mr Birla is fine by me

Neevan was glad he was not forcing him for anything and thats the most refreshing thing about him which attracted ....

Nirbhay - Aj ghar pe rest karo....

neevan tens - nhi mujhe jana hoga meri attendance wsee bhi kam h vo

Nirbhay - U r sick neev.. and no one can attend the college in this condition...  

Neevan - r u ordering me

nirbhay knew he will rebel...

nirbhay - Yes! and dont force me to lock u up in this home...  better be a good kid and rest

neevan eyes widen - did u just told me a kid?

Nirbhay raised his eyebrows

neevan - i m sixteen and i m not a kid...

Nirbhay shook his head he gently patted his head and left for the first time he saw a natural cute side of the boy and he dont want to Stop him...   while neevan just realise that his brother patted him just like he does that with nishant... does that mean he also hold that place in his heart

neevan shook his head stop it neevan u r expecting too much..... 

Time passes

neevan reach down from his room nishant didnot came to annoy him for once and he missed him his guilty conscience was killing him...

Suddenly he saw nishant coming upstairs he deliberateky stood at the middle of the passage so that he can block him

nishant saw him and tried walking other way but neevan was blockinh his way

nishaht - piche hato mujje jana h

neevan - mujhe bhi jana h... tum bhi pichr hat sakte ho

nishant sighs and step back neevan shock nishaht gave him the passage neevan shock that he gave in so easily he was ready for a full fledged fight... 

Neevan sighs while nishant left...

Divya saw all this and smiled... she went to him ...

Divya - kbhi kbhi bht complicate chize ek simple sorry se solve hojaty h

Neevan - me kyu sorry bolu meine kia kya

divya raised his eyebrows - kuch nhi kia

neevan shook his head

divya - okay to phir jao apne kamre me rest Karo

neevan annoyed she loved playing this with him ..

divya was turning

neevan - apko lgta h mujhe sorry bolna chahiye

divya - agar galty ki h to karna chahiye ... warna nhi.. sorry is an emotion dil se nikle to he bolo warna nhi

divya left while neevan pouts he has too much ego to say sorry...  But now when he is on the way of taking a chance he had to work on every relation... if Nirbhay birla can ask for a chance from him why cant he?

Staff was going towards nishant room

neevan - excuse me kha ja re h ap

staff - nishant baba k room me...unka khana dene

neevan took the plate from him - Aap jao me de dunga

Staff - par

neevan - i will do that trust me ap jao...





staff left .. neevan took out a pen and paper and wrote sorry on it... he hope nishant see this and give him a chance ?

Walls are breaking finally new realation is blooming in lets see how it comes out....



Precap :- Spoiler Alert to be posted in a while

Target :- 280+ votes and 350+ comments

Tani :- How did u like the episode ?? I guess somewhere down the lane u people got your answers why nani was not able to contact nirbhay... it was neevan's stubbornness too..

How did u like Divya in today's episode?

some of you may think she over reacted but in my perspective sometime u need to be harsh if u want to show your child the Reality...  and Divya only did that .. opinion may vary.. its fine but no abusing ...

Slowly and steadily things are going to change u need to understand it

How was nirbhay neevan scene?

R u liking the progress of the equation??

what are your expectations from next chapters..?

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